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Nice story, I\'m looking forward to seeing where you go with this plot line. Please update soon.

Good. Still a few spelling errors here and there, though less than the first chapter. Keep going, and I look forward to the next chapter. :)

I liked it. A good spin off the Tenchi Muyo series. Which happens to be one of my favorites of all time. The characters were portrayed very well, but I\'m concerned about who weds who? I guess I\'ll wait till you write more. Which better be soon, please! I seriously enjoyed the plot, which I find to be well thought out. I do so hope you develop the characters more in later chapters, and I am looking forward to reading them. As I always seem to say \"Have Fun!\"

Anxiously Awaiting The Next Chapter,

Iceheart

O.O Wow! What a first chapter! I like it, I like it! Please update soon...such an original storyline and very well written! ^^ Great job, and write more soon!
Sayuri~

Not bad. Some spelling and grammar errors, but please post more. But check the spelling and grammar more closely next time. :)