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November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story, I hope you write more soon
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i find it hard to keep up with because of how you suddenly introduced these new characters and yuki and kyo arent really that well projected in this story ahh im so mean >_< but this is a review? =p it was interesting thought ^-^
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Update, would\'ja? Great. Bye!
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man I want to know what happens next!!!! update please :)
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this story rocks! so...mystery like! but uhm...i think you might need a beta and i\'d be happy to volunteer, i do some beta work for a few other authors, and i like betaing a lot. i do love the story, it just needs some spell checking and paragrapgh seperation to make it more reader friendly.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The stars promise a majesty the story fails to deliver. Two stars, maybe. Byt 100? I think not.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, what the heck is up with the 1000 stars?!?!?!?!
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The stars you have in you story summary extend too far across the screen screwing up the formatting so that I have to scroll. Please delete the long line of stars. Thanks
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have liked what I have read so far, but I am dying to know the rest. Gworkwork. I know it is not that much feed-back, but I am not good at evaluating things.
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it, it really good so far and i can't wait to read more