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for Tsume's Paradise

by YaoiGoddess

person Mela Kenzu
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really wasn't expecting that...but I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY liked it. Toboe, you dirty little thing, that was so awesome X3

TT TT I only wish I could read about Tsume taking Toboe to 'paradise' ...By the way, your description of Toboe was just delicious.
person Sarong Luv
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Luv it I hope you make other stores too (grin)
person JadenLeeFaye
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hott!!! And dont worry love, you did the sex scene great! *winks* I loved it and hope you continue to write more!
person DemonicStreak
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* that waz so hot i nearly peed myself from laughter........... or something else...anyway your still really good so keep it up....
person Dana
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was the one of the best Tsume/Toboe fan fics eva'!
person Aenima*Hentai
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say... This is an excellent story. The roof of a seemingly vacant city mimics their past travels, and is very fitting. And well done keeping the two in character, but managing to detail a newly developed Toboe. I\'ve rated it five stars. (Er, plus signs...) I hope to read more of your work. Again, excellent! -A*H
person Paulina
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, will there be more chapters or is this a one shot, hope not!!! Its great keep it up!
person Ezrin
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say that was yummy? Yummy and hot and....Well you get the idea. I never thought of Toboe as the dominant one but that worked out nicely...Oh, and one more thing, can I borrow your muse? I could trade a little while for Heero, or Hiei (he\'s a little violent though. Have to hit him with a bat sometimes), or Jin, Kurama, Sesshomaru, Koga...etc. Lol. Keep up the good work
person no name to speak of
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story it was very well writen
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you should write more Wolf\'s Rain fanfics, if ya haven\'t already.... :) Keep up the writings... Maybe even make a sequal...or continuation of this one???? Either way, keep writing definately!

~StarwolfRealms~

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