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for Never Gray

by SakuraBubblesMOO

person Talia
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!
person Songbird21
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story. Very well written. :) My only complaint is no Tohru/Kyo smut. You big meanie!! ;P Lol.
person Yuki-kun
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has to be, by far, the best Furuba fanfiction I have ever read. I give you my highest remakrs of praise, Sakura-sama. :B Do you have any other Furuba fanfiction, or any other by a chance? xD I really like your writing style. You should write more Furuba, if you don\'t already. Yeah. That\'s my review. Love it, hate it, whatever. I just wanted to let you know that I really liked your fic. \\m/(>__<)\\m/ Rawk on, kthnx

IM me if you like at xMiyaviYukix.

~Yuki~
person NUNI
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I was a little dissapointed with the Kyoru, but it\'s still a good fic. Very emotional, it even made me cry. I hope to read more stories from you very soon. As for \'Never Gray\' it was excellent.
person Amberella
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww! I really liked your stories, but PLEEEEAASE....MAKE ANOTHER STORY WITH MAINLY TO KYO AND TOHRU! ITS KILLING ME! Keep up the good work! ^-^
person YuukiSan
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YuukiSan: I loved that story. I admit that at the beginning I didn\'t really like it, but something drew me in anyways. Now I love it. You\'ve grown so much as the story progressed and I can\'t wait until the next story that you write.

I loved the ending, I knew that whatever you did it was going to be amazing and it was. I loved Shigure\'s response to Hatori about Yuki seeing Akito again before he died. The \"eat shit and die\" thing was classic. I admit during the epilogue I cired again and only really good authors get my to cry.

All I have to say is never give up and keep writing, until next time.

~YuukiSan & NinjaMouse.
person Mitsuki
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading the whole thing, and it\'s really good. Yuki and Haru are ever so sweet, and I don\'t usually read fics about them (I\'ve been searching for Kyoru ones but I can\'t find any! ;_;) Nevertheless, this was really sweet, and the ending was touching! Keep writing ^^ Maybe next time, a Kyoru? XD
person YuukiSan
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YuukiSan: Oh my goodness. I must say that this is the first story that has made my cry. You can\'t kill Yuki, that\'s just too cruel. Too both the readers and to Haru.

I love the carnival scene where Yuki and Haru hug for the first time after three months. Makes you all warm and fuzzy inside, and it\'s just so damn cute. And those outfits...damn girl you know how to get the juices flowing! *pictures Haru and Yuki in matching oufits and drools all over keyboard*

NinjaMouse: Well since she\'s off in la-la land it\'s time to say my two cents. I do like the story line and the concept. Though I will admit that there are some parts I can\'t picture myself, such as Yuki going down on Haru. But the explaination that you put in does make sense, so I guess it works in the end (wow that made no sense...I\'ve been hanging around her *points to YuukiSan* and Kurai too much).

YuukiSan: Again I say that I love this story, and that last chapter was amazing. Everyone can write a death or almost death fic, but not everyone can write on well, and you did. If you wanted to kill Yuki from the start do it, don\'t care what other people on the site says or are going to say...just do it. I can tell that whatever you do in the last chapter, it\'s going to be amazing, you\'ve grown so much in writing this story and it shows.

~YuukiSan & NinjaMouse.
person PainfulRememberance
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work! Update!
person kaitlyn
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaawww! i don\'t think i\'ve gushed about how utterly adorable these couples are, or how many incense sticks i\'m going to burn in yuki\'s honor cuz he\'s so self-sacrificing, or how hott kyo is, or how cute tohru is, or a whole bunch of other things, but i think, by this point, you\'ve gotten the idea, and this isn\'t a problem any longer! i think yuki should carve a windchime with all the zodiac animals on it, and put the rat and the cow on one little bell/chime thing, put the dog and the snake and the dragon together on another, put the tiger and the sheep together, then the monkey and the rabbit and the boar together, then there\'s the horse and the rooster, and then there can be one with a cat, and he can be with a butterfly or bird to be tohru! that could be cool! OR, maybe a chime that has a dangle-jingly-thing that\'s black on one side and white on the other, and another dangle-jingly-thing that\'s a pair oof gray eyes! oo! im all excited now to see what you\'re gonna make!

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