rate_review Reviews

I am thoroughly enjoying this story. The lemons and limes are truly amazing. And, quite a plot twist too. Wonder what we are going to do about getting another head of the family. Does Akito have to be the father? Can\'t wait for the next chappie.

Ahahahaha, I love the Yuki and Haru pairing. ^^; Thou hav have a tendancy to liek the Hatori and Tohru pairing as well, but Tohru and Kyou is just as adorable. This story is great and your descriptions are nice too. Poor Haru...and Yuki too. Akito seems more bastardly in this then I found in the anime...but thats just me. Anyway keep writing, I can't wait for more Haru/Yuki mome..an..and Aya-chan is soooooooooooooooo freaking adorable!

*gasp!* EEEEEEE! *dies* X_X

This is a wonderful, wonderful fic. I can't wait to see it finished!

The main reason I love this story so much is because it's the first time I've found a fic that I feel respects Yuki as a character.

A lot of the time, the poor mouse is made into a weeping girly uke sort of character, but I've always felt that Yuki is not only incredibly strong, he also has a very dominant personality, and then when paired with Haru (especially when he's White), he'd be even more dominant - because White is fairly passive and mellow.

Anyway, love the story, can't wait to see the rest!

Please, no deaths. If there are deaths....I will cry. And that is bad. ;.; This is an awesome fic though, very well written. I enjoy it muchly. Please update soon!

This is an incredibly interesting tale! Well structured and planned. I love the pairings. Chapter Four leaves me in such suspense. Hope you can update soon, good luck on future sections.

Woohoo! I don't mind at all! *twirls* I love Ayame. He's so dramatic. =P And mooing Haru=cuteness! Squee! Oh! I forgot to add last time that Haru running back to plant a smooch on Yuki in chapter one was sweet. ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter! Seriously, I can't. *twitches fingers*

Yay! I like this! Eez goot. =3 Um, the second chapter is all underlined though. Eek. X_X But other than that, it was well written quite enjoyable. I liked the Yuki/Haru-ness more than the Kyo/Tohru-ness, but then . . . yeah . . . *wipes away the fangirl drool* Heehee. Hooray for boyses cuddling and kissing! XD

Hey I like this so far. I'm all about Kyo x Tohru and I don't care who the hell Yuki ends up with although they do seem rather snuggly. Kudos on the writing style. Update soon, please.

Magawa

i think it is good and i can;t wait to read more