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I <3 this universe

Aawww~ Such a sweet ending!!! ^^ Very nicely done -- I really enjoyed this \"jump back\" into the \"past\" of your series.......kinda\' like visiting a specific event earlier along the timeline, ya\' know? Then again, it could be that I just read this out of order....... ^___~ But still, very cute, and I loved the way you portrayed Krad\'s \"shyness\" and his relationship with Satoshi at this point in the story. Keep up the good work!!!

Omg!!!!are you gonna update ?!?!! YOU HAVE TOO iam hooked!!!!!XD umm shouldent this be krad x satoshi just thinking hehe Gomen anyway nice fic i enjoyed it alot ! so umm any new update coming soon ne ^________~ loved the fic keep it up!

iam cheering for you ! woo hoo for krad x Satoshi!!!!

Hi there. I saw all the stores that you rote. I was just wondering witch order they go in. Cause i really wont to read them, but i don\'t wont to get confused. So if you could let me know i would aprisheat it, than you. my email addres is graywolfm18@yahoo.com. Hope to here from you.

Poor Satoshi! Keep off that arm and let Krad do everything, dude! Don\'t wanna make things worse, do ya? Anyways, cute fic. When the next part of the Balance series gonna be out, huh, huh, huh? Can\'t wait to see what\'s in store for them all!

Loved it, I really like the way you picture them, hope to read more

I know that you said that English isn't your native language, but you write it better than most so-called "authors" out there who think that to write a good fanfiction, all you need to do is put a certain couple together, make them have "Hawt" sex, and then post it without care for grammar, spelling or syntax.

Anyways, one bit of critcism, and I think it's more of a typo than an actual error. I noticed that while Krad is thinking, you typed "Satoshi accepted him, wanted him, maybe even needed him, and Daisuke and Krad accepted him just the same. " Is the Krad is "Daisuke and Krad" supposed to be "Dark"? Hope so ,because otherwise, you have Krad accepting himself. Which I'm PRETTY sure he does, but you can never tell about these things. *teasing grin*

Please keep up the great work. I admire your skills, all the moreso since you don't come from an English speaking country.

D N Angel Manga ROCKS!!!! @_@ Satoshi and Daisuke.......

Wie schön, dass es euch noch gibt^^ Die Story war wie immer klasse und ich hoffe, es kommt noch mehr. Die Idee, sozusagen ein Zwischenspiel einzuflechten ist genial. Aber leider war es ziemlich kurz. Sagen wir so, ich hoffe auf mehr.

-Leya