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by CrimsonBlade

person crimson blade
schedule November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay, black yaoi kitten, i must say i'm offended. i made it VERY clear in my story. yohji, omi, and ken die. aya is sent to hospital by kritiker, then they send him to an insane asylem, were shu shu finds him. esset then takes aya in and keep him okay? happy? can you be done telling how crappy i am at telling people what's happening and making the transitions? you need to look at the story a tad bit more carefully. i know you probebly think i'm being a bitch, but get over it. talk to the other people that read it and ask them if they understand it. thank you for your flame though. i can go burn down buildings now to ventoff steam.
person black yaoi kitten
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the story is really great but u keep changing from normal p.o.v to schu's p.o.v... it's hard to understand and wasn't aya whit krer??er?? how did schwartz get to him?? and u must really look over how u write! But I really LOVE the story^^
person Bloodrose
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay a continuation! More Schu/Aya please? *puppy dog eyes* ^_^

Ok so Rosenkreuz is the training school for psychics and such that Esset owns/runs and Schwarz were trained there. That answer your question?
Also the anime series never went into Brad, Schuldig or Nagi's pasts, expect a couple of flashback pics from Nagi's. Their pasts I believe can be found in the Drama CD's but I've not heard them so I'm not sure. *shrugs*
person Bloodrose
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!!! Please?

I'm loving your style of writing and how you've set up Aya and Schu.. *loves Schu/Aya pairings*
Please let Schuschu keep his kitten. *begs and offers cookies*
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cries* YAAAAAYYY!!!! I have reveiws!!! *cries some more* reveiws really do exist!!! thanks so much guys!!! *explodes*
person Anna
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What happens next? I want more! Pleeeeesssee................

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