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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really really liked it. The lemon was great, with all that emotion firing them in, and the descriptions of their non-gentle but fierce and stron, sword made, sex.
And the title-theme about their understanding? Brilliant. Exactly what I imagine when I see that 20 something episode, their first fight afeter Tokugawa Era.
Beautiful fic.
And the title-theme about their understanding? Brilliant. Exactly what I imagine when I see that 20 something episode, their first fight afeter Tokugawa Era.
Beautiful fic.
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE that you had them competing, even in love-making. The line: "It wasn’t love, and it wasn’t gentle." was friggen' awesome, and perfectly reflects how I imagine two warriors who still aren't exactly on the same side would be with each other. Great job, thank you.
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was simply brilliant. I loved this story, simply brilliant.
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Splendidly done.
Thank you for writing a Saitou/Kenshin fic, and a coherent one at that.
I love how you focused on need, rather than \"love\"...by doing so, it lends a more realistic air to the pairing.
And I love how you touched upon the nature of their relationship in relation to Sano and Kaoru.
There\'s usually this waffiness in these fics, that makes the characters in the story OOC, so I commend you on a job well done.
Thank you for writing a Saitou/Kenshin fic, and a coherent one at that.
I love how you focused on need, rather than \"love\"...by doing so, it lends a more realistic air to the pairing.
And I love how you touched upon the nature of their relationship in relation to Sano and Kaoru.
There\'s usually this waffiness in these fics, that makes the characters in the story OOC, so I commend you on a job well done.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Touching and well written :)
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You are the first author I\'ve found who took into account how Kenshin had lived during the war and how it had helped shape him. I\'ve often thought about how similar both Saitou and Kenshin are and you basically wrote a story about it. Kind of creepy really since we\'ve never spoken. Anyway, once more, beautiful story and I hoep to read more of your work in the future.
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was your first yaoi lemon. Good work if I do say so myself. The first is always the hardest to get out, the rest come easier. You said you don\'t have a beta reader for your yaoi stories, well I\'ll be your beta. I write and publish my stories here too, mostly yaoi, so I might be able to help. Email me if you read my stories and think I could help you out.
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December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that this is the most realistic yaoi I\'ve read to date. The power you brought in the beginning through Saitoh\'s thoughts was an incredible way to build up to the actual lemon. And the repetition with needing someone who understands was a great technique.
It was also short and to the point, not like most that are over drawn. And that was perfect for what you wanted to accomplish here.
All together, I\'d say this was a fabulous Yaoi. I\'ll be looking for more of your work.
Alexa
It was also short and to the point, not like most that are over drawn. And that was perfect for what you wanted to accomplish here.
All together, I\'d say this was a fabulous Yaoi. I\'ll be looking for more of your work.
Alexa
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was a very awesome fic. i loved it!
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I came back to re-read this glorious piece... and, alas, something has gone awry. It is no longer complete. Please fix it. It is too magnificent an accomplishment for you to lose. Some of us want to savor it over and over.
Tsuki-san aka A silent fan
Tsuki-san aka A silent fan