rate_review Reviews

As a rule, I don't like yaoi... but, this was something very different. I'm not even sure what made me read it. I don't like M/M pairings. I'm female and I'm straight, but this wasn't the usual M/M pairing. It wasn't a romantic interlude between lovers. It was something 'real' that could very possibly occur between enemies turned commrads... or wher Ser Saitou and Kenshin have become. It wasn't disgusting, or dirty, or naseating. It was bloody brilliant!!!

The lemon was edgy and very believable, and it wasn't the usual type of thing I've seen on the yaoi circuit. I don't know if that's what you intended or not, but whatever you did... you have a fan here. It was the finest piece of yaoi fanfiction I have EVER read. It stands out among all of them because it is believable and REAL. It kept the characters integrity and didn't change them into something or someone they are not. I applaud you and can't wait to see if you write something like this again. Just because of this, I would be willing to accept romantic pairings in the yaoi from you because you had the insight to write something tangible.

I hope I haven't offended you. That's not my intention. I just want to be honest... and this is a great piece. You have a great voice. Keep writing. The ooey-gooey M/M fictions just aren't believable. This was. Bravo, my friend. Bravo.

A silent fan... a loyal fan.
God bless.

*nods* I like. I really like. You are, as we use to say, 'da bomb'

I like Kenshin and Saitou and finding a GOOD one is the most difficult thing to do.

I really liked how you made it rough and not WAFF and all, but I do love WAFF...

Yeah, so please continue writting yaois and all. *peace sign*

--Midnight-- *woot woot*

Usually I don't go for yaoi but this one keeps them in character, doesn't deny Kenshin's love for Kaoru and yes, portrays both of them as hardened men. And it is in good agreement with wartimes historic customs (yes, men in stressfull situations will seek relief from one another). Well done.

That was great. I liked how you explained Saitou and Kenshin's understanding of each other. I thought this was very well thought out. The lemon was nice too. Great job all around.

wow, just wow. This was good, it matched Saitou's personality very well and i enjoyed the concept, nice job. ^^

Nice. : ) It's hard to find Saitou/Kenshin fics nowadays and yours was really quite good. You don't have to worry.Your grammar isn't as bad as you think and many thanks for that delicious lemon scene.
Looking forward to more RK fics from you.
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