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This was good. I was a little turned off at the Tohru/Kyo sex because... it seemed very OOC for our little rice ball, but I kept coming back to read it. I think that chapter six was your best chapter, because I love how Yuki felt after the fact. Poor Haru, too. Eee I love him to death... oh, and another thing that kind of killed this for me was the random Japanese. They\'re already speaking Japanese, so why put the actual romanji? It doesn\'t make a whole lot of sense to me, unless they were speaking... like... Spanish beforehand and decided to randomly say \'I love you\' in Japanese. It\'s just weird.

The smut at the end was good. Mmmhmm. I\'d like to see more from you.

I love it!!!! You\'ve captured them perfectly and I love the interactin between Yuki and Haru!!! :-P Keep it up!!

This fic is looooooove~ly! Great job, it really made my day. X)

I love this story, I love this story, I love this story! But of course you already know that because I sit on your computer and read at about once a day!!! You write WAFF now and it\'s all thanks to me!!!! *bows to the appluding audience*. Though now I write angst and fight scenes because of you so here I say \'Give me back my WAFF and I\'ll give you back your damn angst!!!!\'

I love Haru/Yuki!!! I love it, love it, love it! Remember when I hated Haru/Yuki, hey on that note remember when I hated yoai. And now look at me I\'m going to write my own Haru/Yuki!!! *shoots dagers at you while drying hair and looking absolutly adorable...ahhh gotta love Shuichi* Love the break down scene...poor Yuki all consufed. But I ust say writing break down scenes are fun and so are fight scenes. Gah give me back my WAFF damn it!!!

You also have to thank me on writing a Fruba fic. I remember it well that because I got my idea you got yours. So again I say \"Thank you, thank you!!!\" You should write another one!!! Only this one...lots of angst and fighting...and give me back my damn WAFF!!!!

And this is why I shouldn\'t read InuYasha fics before reviewing.

OH MY GOD!! O.O

That was baout the fuzziest thing I\'ve EVER read!! FUZZY!! I got all choked up and bwah! ^_^ I dunno if I can really describe it!! Oh me goodness, that was great! I mean, it was good even WITHOUT the lemony stuff, and that\'s saying something as I\'m a huge fan of PWPs...*sheepish grin* Let\'s just say, the Lemons were a bonus, hell, I even liked the KyoxTohru, and I tend to steer away from hetero couples, I\'M A RABID YAOI FAN GIRL AND PROUD OF IT DAMMIT!!! WOWZA! Good story!! ^_^ And here\'s a present for you: A BASKET OF TERRIBLY CAFFINATED AND SUGARY THINGS!! WOOT!!

i loved this, it was so fucking awesome! woot.

I\'m sorry I missed the whole thing practically. Just the other day i was looking for an update, it wasn\'t th ere then poof! Its all done! It was a wonderful story. I\'m very glad Yuki and Haru got together in the end.

YuukiSan: As if you left it there!!!! It\'s just starting to get really good!! (I\'ve read the entire story so I do know this for a fact) You need to update and let other people know what\'s going to happen.

As for that last chapter...um wow. That\'s all I\'m going to say (hey you already knew that I really liked that chapter). I never thought that in a million years would I read a Yoai story, but here I am, not only reading a Yoai but enjoying it too. And hey I\'m going to be writting one of my own thanks to you.

As I said before you gotta update your story...you can\'t just leave it like that...it\'s murder.

NinjaMouse: I think you need to lay off the super-sugary lemonade when your writing reviews. And I thought that your normal tangents were bad!

I like the idea of a story from Yuki\'s perspective. Especially since the manga seems to be leaning this way (much to my vast disappointment). I would like to see him get to sleep with Tohru, I think it\'d bring an interesting dynamic. Anyway, keep updating!

oh wow i feel so sorry for yuki-kun even though i\'ve always been more of a kyo lover! that jsut means you have great talent as a writer! keep it up!