rate_review Reviews

Oh well done!

what a pretty story! They make the most cutest couple ever.

That was incredibly good. SOO GOOD. ^^ I liked it. I feel like there is no need to continue. ^^ Pretty good. *sigh* Much more descriptive than what I would have the guts to write about.

gods. absolutely awesome. their characters are so genuine, and the romance wasnt so picture perfect as to be unrealistic. i love the quip on how she seemed to have been made for him. 5 stars. not much more i can say. loved it. ^^

great job! i really like this pairing and you did it so well. keep up the wonderful work! :)

Amazing!!!

Damn FF.Net and their policies. I have the vaguest recollection of reading something like this somewhere, probably on FF.Net, and it stuck on my mind for years. I think I found that fic. This was a great story. I love how you managed to keep Gene and Melfina in character compared with all the other Outlaw Star fics I\'ve read. The smut was great -- sweet with the right touch of sensuality. I also like how there was something behind the sex; Gene had to find his meaning to live, and that night Melfina offered him one. Touching and well-written. Excellent job.

-C. Callispi

how interesting! I know I read this story on Fanfiction.net a long time ago. I remember that part where Jean says how cruel it was that she was made perfect, like a real woman. That is the real climax of the story- you did a great job :-D

Oh wow... this was marvelous--the best Gene/Mel fic I\'ve ever read in my life. Awesome. I loved the story--even if it was a bit AU. I loved the whole part about how Gene was scaring Mel and stuff. God, reading this makes me want to write my own Gene/Mel lemon, though I\'m certain mine wouldn\'t even be HALF as good as yours. Awesome work!

Awwwwww! This was really wonderful. I think you really captured how Gene really feels about Melfina.