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by BombaySuki

schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate you (not really). You made me actually cry during chapter 8. And I don't easily cry. But I loved the story anyway :) I love that pairing
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha...

I've read your fic before at a different site (I think maybe fanart-central, back when it was cool and made sense), so this isn't really my views on your story or anything (ps, my views are 100% positive). I just thought your review sequence was funny.

With each update, the number of words in all caps increased, the usage of the phrase "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!" became more and more redundant, and the threats and insults for your cruelty became enough to make Mr. Rogers want to swallow a cigarette butt off of the street.

And yet, all of the same people kept returning, and at the end, when everything gets all happy, all you get is, "well, I'm glad you decided to wrap this up with a happy ending."

That's all I really have to say.

Toodles!!

(I really did like your fic when I first read it, by the way.)
person silverblaise
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww I'm so glad this is completed and has a happy ending! I was so disappointed when JJ died and thought "that can't be it" so I'm really glad that it wasn't and they were able to be together. Hope you're encouraged to write more fics! ^__^
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know whether to kiss you or kill you!! One minute things are great - JJ and Drake gettin' all cozy and such - and the next everything's gone to Hell!!! A bomb?!?! Jesus Christ!! You horrible meanie!! (not really!) Way to jerk someone around by the heartstrings!! ARRGH!! It was one Hell of a rollercoaster ride that's for sure!!! I'm just glad it all worked out in the end! Whew! You have no idea how many Kleenex I went thru in the last few chapters!! First I'm sobbing me heart out over JJ's death (big fat tears), then I'm bawling over Drake (more big tears), and finally I get to weep with joy over that wonderful beeping sound of the EKG machine!! Hooray!! I'm exhausted - but I loved every minute of it!!
Koneko
person Maka
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! He\'s not actually dead right?! RIGHT?! Oh god, I can\'t wait for the next chapter! I\'m on the edge of my seat already and now you\'ve givin me a cliffhanger! ARGH! You\'re the first one that I\'ve read where I\'ve actually liked this paring, so JJ can\'t die!

I love your first person narritive by the way.

I hope to read the next chapter soon!

I truly love this story! It\'s so heartwrenching.

maka
person Orial
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god i\'m such a sap. *sniffle* i\'m crying right now reading this. Please say there\'s some sort of happy ending?
person Enzeru
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...*cries* OMG!! I CAN\"T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT! It was good but GOD i hate sad endings! *cries so much that the room fills with tears*
person Karasu-san
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate you....T_T not really, but still. *bawls and hugs JJ plushie and other products associated with JJ* WHY?! Oh well, keep going.
person Lina Morley
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I LOVE this fic!! It\'s on of the best Drake/JJ fics i\'ve ever read!! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person me
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Much applause... *applauds you* This is one of the best stories I\'ve ever read on here no joke, dead serious. This is the first story on here to make me cry too. *continues to applaud you* I love it, pure and simple.

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