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by BombaySuki

person Mauztattoo
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAGHHH! You Finally update and you break my heart! What\'s real and what\'s (pardon the pun) FAKE? Also, what\'s up with the formatting? It makes it pretty hard to read since I\'m still on a pretty small old monitor. I\'ve really enjoyed this and I want to see how you are wrapping up.
P.S. Ted and Drake? Ick!
person Shirubaa Kitsune
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What in seven hells is going on?! I\'m so confused now.... and what took you so long to update hu?..... TT_TT I hate confusion.....
person Mihoshi
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
ARE YOU F**KING NUTS OR WHAT?
WHATS THE BIG IDEA STOPPING AT A MOST CLIMATIC PART OF A FIC.
I WAS ALMOST LOST ON WHO WAS SAYING WHAT, AND NOW THAT I CATCH UP, I GET TOSSED UP A PLOT TWIST.
SO WHAT, IS JJ STILL A LIVE? WAS ALL THAT BAD THINKING JUST A NIGHTMARE FOR DRAKE?
WILL YOU EVER........STOP.......THESE.....CLIFF.............HANGERS?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THOSE TWO BETTER STAY TOGETHER OR I\'LL SUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

On a positive note, great story so far; keep going please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person M.
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I love you. WRITE MORE!! There are so not enough Drake/JJ stories out there!! Gah. WOW.
person Eriika
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
person jp
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I will forgive you only if you update quickly for the remainer of this story.

PS I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person cyanide01
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! If I don\'t read the next bit soon Im gonna go crazy!!! I HAVE to find out what happens with JJ!!!!! PLEASE!!!!! This is one of the best stories Ive ever read and I really really really reall want to find out what happens!!! If not I will cry!!!
person Erika
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'M GONNA KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHAT THE HECK MADE YOU RIGHT A CHAPTER LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!
I\'M ALMOST IN TEARS BECAUSE OF IT!!!!!!!!!
ALL I KNOW IS, IF THAT PHONE CALL FROM RYO IS SOMETHING BAD, AND THAT JJ......IS.....
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
I CAN\'T EVEN SAY IT!!!!!!!!!
JJ BETTER BE ALIVE DAMMIT, SOMEHOW, MAYBE DRAKE CAN GIVE HIM BLOOD OR SOMETHING
JUST DONT....LET....HIM....DIE!!!!!!!!
person Zelianyu
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You couldn\'t make it a tad longer poooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh. I likedi t but yeah I\'e wanted tyou to updated but when inspiration comes it comes. As does the when you have time to type you have time to type. So when everyo uhave the time and teh ideas please update. I\'m an author and I know how it is lol. I have toooooo many stories out though. I hope you post soon. Sadness all the fics tha tI mareading are ending quickly. I hope you do another fic after this one. It\'d be cool if it could be this pairing you don\'t see this pairing much on theis site anway Liked it and hope yo pst soon.
person Shirubaa Kitsune
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAA! How cruel how crule....a cliffe....YOU CAN\'T KILL JJ YOU CAN\'T IF U DO I\'LL NEVER READ YOUR FICS AGAIN.....plus i\'ll send my wolf to eat you!

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