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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good, good, but... where's the next chapter!?
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great story so far. Is this a one-shot? If not, please update soon. I\'ll be sure to R&R. Adios.
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Yippee! Whoo hoo! Eerie Queerie! I got no critisism, except that u need to update! ::Smiles::
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo!!!!
Not bad. It was very enjoyable though it seemed to me that you kept getting confused with your tenses...you know past and present...
But other tthatthat it was great and I'm not sure whether it's meant to be a one-shot or not but it definetly leaves room open for another few chapters....
Keep writing:)
Not bad. It was very enjoyable though it seemed to me that you kept getting confused with your tenses...you know past and present...
But other tthatthat it was great and I'm not sure whether it's meant to be a one-shot or not but it definetly leaves room open for another few chapters....
Keep writing:)
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic and hasunuma's self revelation and i hope mitsuo finds his as well. ^^ pleese update soon!
~*Shadow
~*Shadow