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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has a good plot but I don\'t really like your view of Tohru. From the series I sortof got that she was a very innocent, old fashioned girl. Not saying that she wouldn\'t make love to Yuki, just that she wouldn\'t be so affectionate or have sex with him a day or two after thier love confession. Just my opinion though, however you see Tohru is how you see her. Other than that, I think you\'re doing okay. For some reason it didn\'t really draw me in. I\'d like to see where you take this fic though.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting twist of events. At the beginning I was sure Tohru would end up with Yuki, but when she admitted that she loved Kyo, I was very pleasantly surprised. Update, update! ^__^ And thanks for reviewing my Inuyasha fic. Your opinion has been very helpful.
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I\'ve been missing out, school has been hogging my time of late. >.< Things are really in a tangle now aren\'t they? She does the horizontal mambo with Yuki, but later finds out that she is in love with Kyo and if her dreams are any indication wants to be with him all the way...What a wicked little twist. I can\'t wait to see what Yuki is going to do...Will he step away like a gentleman? Or will he fight to keep her? Oh la la!! Until next time! ^_^
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE CHAPTERS DAMMIT!!!! I COMMAND YOU TO UPDATE EVERY DAY!!! This story is just wayyyy too good! I loves it! WHEEE!!! SO UPDATE!! UPDATE I SAY!!! Or I will find where you live and stalk and pelt you with leeks until you update!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what happens next? I want to know!!! *whines* please update soon!
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh a cliffy! please update soon .. its a great story!!
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well..... that hit yuki hard in the face! update asap!
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear god, update!
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor tohru.she\' so confused. Update asap!
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December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chap 4 has a good twist to it. I like your writing style. Personally I think the idea of Juunishi sex is difficult for any of us. How much contact is considered a hug? The author is vague about the whole thing. In the anime, it seemed that all the girl had to do was touch one of them and *POOF* we have a pet. But, you did pretty good at getting around it. I like the juicy way Yuki\'s mind is working, too.
Update again soon, please.
Update again soon, please.