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for My Happy Ending

by YuukiSan

person TaichiKoi
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kyou! =/ Plz continue, and I hope Kyou gets to be happy later.
person sam
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww. ^_^ Kawaii. However, I agree. I wanna go hug Kyou. Poor Kyou. Awwwwwww.... *runs and hugs Ayame-san instead... cough cough...* right. Focus. This is really good. The chappies are a little short though. I still wanna know what happens! Hurry!
person missyspikehead
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oohhhh!!! poor kyo!!! **huggles her kyo cat plushie** **tear** oh well, yuki deserves some happyness too. but poor poor kyo! **openly cries even though she\'s an \"adult\" snicker yeah right shes only 18** i love it keep it up please please please!
person syntax-error
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story, though I would like to see longer chapters.
Lemons please. Long, lusty lemons. =D
person Dragonblade
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Kurai bops NinjaMouse over the head* Be nice! *Dragonblade shoves Kurai away* Don't aggrivate her! I don't need a pissy red-head on my hands.

I LOVE reacreaction Kyou has, seriously, I LOVE tension and angst *maniacle laughter* But I know what's going to happen cause you're writting it in my room so I get to hear all the details and your ideas, mwahahaha!! *dances around* S.E.C.R.E.T!!

LMAO, baka neko ...he'll get over it ...gotta love Yuki ...^^ Yuki! Yuki-Yuki-YUKI! *giggles madly* Gravitation is fun ^^

Write more, write more, write more!! And I'll edit it! Yay, editting is fun! Even though I'm not the best person to have editing a story, specially since I suck at grammar 'n' stuff. Bleh! Writting is fun, and so is editing so everyone will have to put up with my craptacular grammar skillzorz if they want to read your fic ...which they WILL!! *glares* Read her fic! *claps*

PS ...I made her a fan of Yuki x Haru! I'm so proud. I'm still trying to talk her into writting the yaoi she has an idea for ...anyone care to help me talk her into it?

~Dragonblade/ Kurai
person Kayleigh
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like it but i wish she'd gone with kyo-kun! thats okaa because i will save kyo-kun and make him feel better! back to the story: the plot is doing well and i like that you kept the personalities of the characters...well done
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Interesting. I had a feeling that Tohru might pick Yuki. O.o Poor Kyo though. He's not gonna take this well I tell already....Until next time! ^_^

* lays down mouse traps all around her * Heh heh...^_~
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was strange...O.o But...I liked it. Poor Kyo. Until next time! ^_^
person Mourge
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright... I'm soooo enjoying this story! And I don't even like Het! And thats saying sumthin! I'm a yaoi fan all the way.... but this is so cute and I like the way you portray Tohru and Kyou. Especially Tohru, I think you've done a spactacular job on capturing her characterazn. Bn. But please please make SOMEBODY love the little Kyou-kun?!! He is to adorable to leave heart broken.... Thank you for writing an enjoyable story and continue when you can. Ja ne ~Mourge
person A pleased and grateful viewer
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I really liked the part where Yuki get's to kiss his true love. MMMMMMMM, mushy and gooey like caramel. More please!!!!!!

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