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for Everybody's Gotta Cross That Line

by briarwolf

person Sozuki
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Gojyo/Hakkai/Sanzo story I\'ve read (and I think have found...I don\'t remember ^__^;) and I was always interested in the pairing. I think you did pretty good with their characters. They seem slightly ooc, but I\'m a hypicrit (I don\'t think I even spelled that right). If you think about it, everybody writes fanfiction characters ooc. \'Cause most of the time, those pairings aren\'t suppose to be there, so thus making them out of character for liking them. OK, I\'m going to stop analyzing now... your story was really great though! I liked it very much.
person Letainajup
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOO-HOO! I love this 3-some action with especially Hakkai in the middle! Great story, anymore to come with Hakkai?

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