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Aloha!
hmmm, well it seems that when ever a character enters the woods...we all scream at the screen \"NOOO!! NOOO!! DON\'T GO IN THERE!!\" And ofcourse the worst senario happens. I am still a skeptic about the Sano/Kao thing...but you make a good story...And I hate to see Kenshin tormented even more but you know what they say the early bird gets the worm and since in the beginning of this story Kenshin had NO intention of ever *ahem* staking a claim on her...Whose to say even if Sano backs down that Kenshin still won\'t act...So based on your points and story characters..plots..yadda yadda yadda...btw the same goes for Megumi and the claiming...Sano seems to be a good guy in here so maybe he could change and be a good bread winner thus helping Kaoru to have a happy life instead of having a heart broken fence walking unemployed rurouni (I love Kenshin with all my anime heart) but this case goes to the birds...oops I mean Sano. * _~
looking forward to see what happens next...*hands you a pail of water, a private helicopter and the deed to a mountain top hide away* incase they bring fire and brimstone you have a way to survive, a method of escape and a place to hide! James Bond style!! tee hee!!
~ De Lazy Lady Lime

HauntedReality...what a great love triangle....god this is great...keep it up....oooh to have such a thing happen....sighs...oh well at least I can read about them...domo arigatou for updating....catti-dono

This is probably one of the best fics out there. You keep to the story line and it’s a well built story. You have the characters act natural, almost flawless. One part of me wishes for a Kaoru/Sano happily ever after and the other part of me hopes for a Kenshin/Kaoru. It’s so hard to pick which couple to cheer for.

Yaa, that\'s good, heart-breakin\' stuff. That Karou was so distraught that even Yahiko could see what his master couldn\'t was particularly enlightening. And... What about Megumi??? If you\'re brave, you\'ll have her find out about Sano\'s confession to Karou and pile it on even deeper.

I sure hope you\'ve figured a way out of this...
Regards.
W.

i luv it, but i hope there\'s a happy ending to this all *cries* ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;


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Aloha!
Another great chappie!! Infact a pretty messy chappy. Wow talk about take a situation from bad to worse! Well, hopefully this whole mess can be resolved semi peacefully. Geeze I hope Kaoru won\'t get hurt too badly. I\'m figuring that her running into the woods is where she runs into more trouble. I\'m glad you are still writing!! Keep it up girl!!

Merry Christmas!!

~De Lazy Lady Lime

DAMN girlfriend that was sooooo intense yes its the same catti-dono from FF decided to come over to AFF for a time; love this chapter; bows to the great one.....

Poor Kaoru. I wasn\'t expected that from Kensin and Kaoru. Good chapter. Hope you update soon. Until then, take care. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Later

Most excellent!

The convict was quite the philosopher, reading his enemy perfectly. So sorry it ended the way it did. Is it Kenshin\'s fault that he can\'t express himself to Karou that all this had to happen? How much will you have him pay for that shortcoming? Karou should have known him better and approached him herself before all this unraveled. Poor Megumi. What will become of her? Is it her own fault also that she can\'t tell Sano how she really feels? I guess this is what happens when everybody waits around for the next person to actually DO something.
Keep it up.
W.

Hi! I like this sory it\'s nice and sentimental and kind of deep. Kaoru really has to do something about he mix feelings for both guys, just as an idea why not make it a tri: KenshinxKaoruxSano. Anyway I like the way you are writing this fic, can\'t wait to read some more.