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oh no ! please let Kenshin and Kaoru be together ^^;;; I hope it was a mistake, Kenshin doen\'t deserve that much pain. I hope it was just a mistake, other wise I would just cry ^^;;;




Kaoru-chan (onegai K/K )


oh and Buso is spelled like this ^^ BUSU lol

Hi!

I really like this fanfic. But, I have a really strong like towards Kenshin you see. And well these last chapters have been chalked full of pain for him. While I am used to the torture that Kenshin receives. I really wonder how this is all going to turn out. Megumi obviously has feeling for the Rooster head and Kenshin is as usual head over heels for Kaoru...So this leaves it all up to Kaoru. What is she going to do?


Oh please dont be discouraged as to whether you get lots of reviews or no reviews. Sometimes people just don\'t know what to say...Some authors are pleased just to get a \"Update\" review. You are doing a find job with your fanfiction. If you are patient they will come...a bit slow but they\'ll catch on eventually. I mean if you start small you could have it all.

I hope you are able to update soon...this last cliffy leaves the Kenshin-gumi in quite a pinch. *ouch*

~De Lazy Lady Lime

I really like your story, but PLease don\'t let it end here!!!!!

*eyes water* that was sad and yet.... oh so exciting ^^ I hope that Kenshin does something or that Kaoru runs into Kenshin and tells him what had happen between her and Sano.


Kaoru-chan


-always do what makes you feel right withn in your heart

Wow... That was really cool. The narration was absolutely intense. One could feel or even live in that situation so explicitly described. Great ways of keeping up the characters\' personalities. Marvelous job on the fight scenarios (very full of action). This story is well-planned out and well-organized. If this could be a graded creative paper, it would have definitely earned more than five stars for the tremendous effort put into this piece of work. Awesome and outstanding job. Keep up the great work and good luck with updates! (Better update soon too! [I cannot wait!])

*claps* another well written chapter. * bounces up and down* I hope there will be another one coming out very soon ^^ *smiles* please don\'t keep me waiting to long (or else u shall pay)

If you feel comfortable writing a lemon I say go for it and using it as a completion to the relationship is fine.

It helps if you start writing lemons in every story because then you can get go practice. I like your story either way but I also love reading lemons too. Ja Ne!

Sounds to me like Sano & Kaoru and starting to turn up the romance button! I can't wait to read the next chapter and as for your lemon I would like to read but it is entirely up to you.

Your doing a wonderful job of developing the relationship and not falling into some of the mistakes early fanfiction writers by speeding up the relationship just to get to a outcome. I vote yes for lemon Please!