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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here comes Kaoru and Sano sitting in a tree kissing first come love them comes marriage then a bad ass Kenshin to mess it all up. I hope you post soon!
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You did an excellent job focusing on all of the characters feelings in this chapter. I can't wait to read the nexr chapter please post as soon as you can this is truly an awesome fic.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So now it is really starting to get intersting Kaoru had Sano on the brain and Sano was thinking about why it hurt so much for Kaoru to call out Kenshin name you are doing a tremdous job of evolving the plot.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think your charactiztion for this story is dead on and for a first time writer that is very tough to do but it just show how much you inderstand the characters and their traits.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about Kagome & Kouga I personally love the hanyou to much read alt pairings in Inuyasha but I bet you will do a wonderful job with it. I look forward to reading more.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what the confortation going to look like when everything is all settled and done with your awesome story here. I have a question will there be any lemons! I mean if there isn't I understand and won't stop rea I a I am just asking.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It looks like Sano is starting to feel develop different feelings for our favorite kendo instructor. Also showing how Kenshin feels really showed why he must continue to atone for his past.
It will be very intriuging to see how long Sano will stay loyal to his Kenshin. Ja Ne!
It will be very intriuging to see how long Sano will stay loyal to his Kenshin. Ja Ne!
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better and better with each chapter you write. I thought putting the dream was a wonderful way to end the chapter it forshadowed future chapters.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could have a big tall muscular gorgeous man crade whe when I getappoappointed with certain but I can't be that lucky I guess that's why I read so much fanfiction because they are my knights in shinning armor. I loved it.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no with Kenshin gone for quite some time that could be the perfect opporunity for the best friends to become more than just that. I await the chapter and hope to read soon.