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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow for your first fic this is really a good opening chapter.
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I have only read this triangle one another time with and it was well written yours seems like it is going to be good also.
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It will be interesting to see how you will develop the Sano/Kaoru relationship because it also seemed like they acted more like brother and sister. See Ya.
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You don't know how happy I am at seeing somebody right about this love triangle.
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How can you not love Sano he is just to cute!
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start are you sure your a newbie to this cause it doesn't show in your writing.
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I also thought Sano & Kaoru looked cute together but kenshin is cool to.
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing start!
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have piped my interest. I await the next chapter.
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay all I can do is ask that you write more soon.