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for Golden Heart

by Chirella

person kuroi-sakurapetals
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah! You\'re so good. i just knew that Mu was an animal in bed. Saying dirty things like that. he was so naughty and damn sexy. and Shaka you portrayed him well. Very good work. i\'m very impressed! Yah i knew i was right when i called you great. continue with all the great work! i just loved Boys Club! I don\'t think i could ever write a foursome. to complicated but you managed to pull it off. keep up the great work
person Cierzo
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Hi! I\'m Cierzo, from Spain. I\'ve just read you fic and I\'ve loved it. It\'s only a scene, but as I said, I like it, mainly the naturality of both of them, the jokes during the lovemaking and the memories of the past give the fic realism. And in general, you have a nice style and is a pleasure to read your writing. You have made a short PWP interesting, and that isn\'t so easy as it seems, since I\'ve read enough adult fiction to get tired of meaningless sex. I just wanted to tell you. Thank you for posting it:


CIERZO
person Rapture
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hell! You\'re getting better with every story you write. Loved both chapters and the playful mood of darling Mu and Shaka. Hope your muse fells like doing that flashback.
person Hiso-chan
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Milo. *cries into hankie* Anyway, I'm waiting for those wounderful lemons that you tend to produce. ^^

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