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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. car sex is allways fun >.>
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definitely... the car. ^___________________________^
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You really had me thinking that they were in a real shootout in the begining. Nice twist with the paintball though. I enjoyed this story. Hope to see you update soon.
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, RIGHT THE NEXT CHAPTERIT WILL KILL ME IF YOU DONT BECAUSE I LIFE OF OF fAKE FANFICTIONS AND THIS IS THE FIRST ONE THAT ACTUALLY SOUNDS GOOD TO ME
yOUR A GREAT WRITER KEEP UP
yOUR A GREAT WRITER KEEP UP
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start. My vote is for continuing the story after they get home.
Thanks for writing
Thanks for writing
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Hmm... I vote for lemon in the car. And at home... :)
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! I'd like to see some hot lovin' at home in the shower.
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh I loved it it was cute. I twasn't too mush y which is awesome, cause lately thast all i've read in some fics. Anyway yeah not a huge mush lover some is nice, and thies was perfect i loved it very Kawaii!!!!!!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh I loved it it was cute. I twasn't too mush y which is awesome, cause lately thast all i've read in some fics. Anyway yeah not a huge mush lover some is nice, and thies was perfect i loved it very Kawaii!!!!!!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you should have it keep going in the car, but i like it. Hurry up and post