rate_review Reviews

That was an incredibly hot story; you're quite a talented writer. It had quite a few errors however, and the ever-present pet peeve of mine in stories; the hymen never was, nor will it ever be, located inside the vagina. It's easily researchable on medical websites, so don't take my word for it. The foreplay was excellent, although the lemon was a bit rushed, but it cuts the beauty of good citrus when the anatomy is off. In any event, that's just a quirk of mine, and it was a great read otherwise. ~sigh~ Ah, to have Kyo all to myself... heh heh heh

It's been a pleasure finding this gem. ;)

I was always hopeful at the thought of a third chapter and it has come to pass! Granted I haven't been here in a long time. I'm just happy that there is a third one! But as it is, you left it open for a fourth. ^^; Granted we all know what that chapter will be filled with and those two would probably still not make it to the other safe house.

* sighs * Oh, well...We all have imaginations and I don't need a 4th chapter to know what'll go on.

* grins evilly * Anyhoo...Loved it! Especially that third one..Did I mention that? Yes! Yes I did and I'll say it one last time...LOVED ALL 3! ( Especially that last one! ) ^_~

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Thanks for the bounus! ^^

Still as awesome as ever, as I go back and re-read all my old favorites. Looking forward to you writing more fanfiction.... someday? Please? You write such GOOD smut....

May I just say that I adore you muchly? *hugs fic* This made my little fangirl heart quite happy! And damnit, Kyo, can't you at last go once with Yuya in a futon? Also, I think turn about would be fair play in regards to Kyo's clothing getting ripped up a bit. The rare they're going he's going to have to give Yuya something to cover herself with, even if they are the only ones out and about at the moment.

Ooo, this was a wonderful bonus, thank you! ^_^

Heh... this is amusing. Now I have to track this series down... :-p

Great and naughty fun! I love your style of writing and the fact that it's actually really good writing! You've definitely earned your ratings and reviews. You're stories are awesome!

Wowie, another chapter. Hehehe, it is way too descriptive. It just makes me laugh to see Yuya walking like that behind Kyo. But it's sooo hot also. Keep on going!

Mmm, love reading good Kyo smut since I can't write Kyo for the life of me. Or I just haven't tried enough yet. I loved to see his possessive nature and OMG Kyo in his true body is just too sexy for words.

I just finished reading this and not to be mean or anything but can't you make more chapters than that come on!!! That didn't sound like an ending to me. Please write at least one more chapter, at least one more. Great fic by the way, I'm also a Kyo&Yuya supporter.