rate_review Reviews

*claps several times* this chapter...was...AMAZING!! it doesn't matter how long it took you to write it, this was an excellent chapter!! There were very few grammar and spelling problems, but they didn't present any problem for the storyline. This is an exceptional story, and hope that you continue it for as long as possible. I do wonder, however, what Kye is. Is he a Mewtwo? that would explain his relation to Mew. Well, I guess I will just have to wait until then! Best of luck with future updates!!!

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that's not good. i definetly don't want to lose you as a reviewer. you know, i could always put up warnings so you could skip the beastality parts.

- i thank you all for reviewing! i am currently working on the next chapter, yet have no idea when it'll be done. it'll be another big one!

OMFG!!! This story is really good. I read ur replies to ur reviewers though, and i'm sorry but beastiality is not something I am into. So as soon as the beastiality is entered in the story will be the moment when I stop reading. However, this story is extremely well written.

u should be writing for the actual show it would be way better. actually that wouldnt be that hard. a two yr old would write better shit then those morons

Wow... this story is quite interesting. I have one complaint however, I think you should put the dialogue on seperate lines instead of in jumbled paragraphs, it was difficult to see who was talking and when. So keep what\'s spoken and by who seperate from the rest of the paragraph and you\'ll be fine! I like what\'s happening so far... but when is the sex and beastiality coming in?