rate_review Reviews

Dis izz a lot betta dan da movie. :C i liiiiike!!! high five!

Good story, I love Moulin Rouge. My only problem is you seem to foget that Aya is a male in this story, and sometimes you use \"her\" or \"she\" when referring to him. Also, going along with this, you have used \"Satine\" when referring to Aya a couple of times. I just thought you might want to be aware of that. Other than that, this is very good, and well written.

Cool, I\'d hoped to see a Youji/Aya version done for Moulin Rouge X). Though watch out for your tenses as I noticed you switched from past to present tense in some parts, and missed replacing some of the names and pronouns for Aya. Aside from that, the adjustments you\'ve made to keep them in character have kept things fun and interesting. This is a nice read and I hope you complete the story soon!