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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story very much. It starts very seriously and ends with a laugh. Very well done. Grammar is perfect (if ever I missed any mistakes). Plot was greatly done, especially Renamon\'s revelation. Charaterization is very good, especially with Renamon\'s overprotectiveness. (Noticed that I like Renamon a lot?) All in all something very well worthy of a standing ovation. *does a standing ovation* There\'s also one thing I\'d like to tell you about this... it doesn\'t seem to be too \'adult\' for Fanfiction.net. In fact, I think that it would fit right in! Why don\'t you give it a shot? email me with an answer, alright? I\'m enjoying reading your stuff (although I haven\'t reviewed/rated them yet) very much!