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I've never read an AIM style fic quite like this one... It's so descriptively humorous and yummy!!!

That was to funny. omg that made my day.

SO SWEET! >.< I REALLY LIKED THE WHOLE: EGO, HORMONE, BRAIN THING! COOL FIC! *JITTERY*

LOL OMG, I just LOVED it!!
I really liked all of those Brain, heart, ego conversaations, especiall the one where hormones tells nerve board to just kick the pleasure override swith. xDD;; LOL
Pikachu's such a good little hamster too. x3 lol
great story.
I hope to read more from you soon ^^

...how about end of the beginning? this is sooooooooooooooooooooo cool!!!

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Too damn funny! *wipes tears from eyes* I am never gonna forget the hormones thing. Great, just great. Great work.

question: where's Misty and what did they do to them?

Ok, I do hate Pokemon, with a passion. But someone made me read this...and I love it! XD So damn funny. Yay for the body and it's conflicting parts xD Grand job.
~Mally~

Well I love your story so much . It was so funny. I looking for your new story.I have of alor of ideahow to write story, but I don't have time to update. Can you be a good people but the challenge for me. It about Gary/Ash relationship. Gary rape Ash after he lose a battle to Ash. He don't know that he love Ash. He just want to broke him.After that Ash got pregnant(I know male don't get pregnant but it so fun when you got strange thing happen).Ash don't tell anyone about it. Then everyone find out include Gary. The rest it your choice . Remember the story must be Mpreg and Gary/Ash. Today it the nly day I got left. I will go on vacation tomorrow. So bye. Hope any of you be able to help me put the challenge or wrire story about it. I will be please for any of you. Don't blame me for weird challenge. ^_^

please keep going there arent any long stories for Pokemon so please keep going i love it