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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story.In the beginning it didn't really seem that good,but you brought it all together in the end.Bravo!You should make another fic where they find each other.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! it was hot... and sweet, the perfect combinations. nice job! yay for Palletshipping!
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow Ash and Gary drama...nice
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, you suck. Making me FEEL for these chars that I hate! ^^ You're good. Damn good. Yes, the way it's written gets confusing and slightly annoying, but damn. ^^ Good job. I hate Pokemon, but once again you've made me care. Keep rocking!
~Mally~
~Mally~
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that\'s sick and sweet in one. you\'re a good wrighter ya know!
best yaoi couple ever :D
best yaoi couple ever :D
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE create a sequal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet and yet sad at the same time...
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how tragic(evil laugh) is dartz read this he\'d be in tears,unlike me,who doesn\'t have those emotions.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, such a sad ending. But the lemon was *hot*!
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story and i think you should continue it , it could end up becoming a truely amazing story , or atleast a really good happy or sad story.