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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t how how you do it but please contiue the story it is so good
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!! I want to see what happens with them, there aren\'t a lot of good Ash-Gary pairings out there and this one has some major potential!! I\'l lbe waiting, if you feel like emailing me, go for it!! You\'re the greatest!!
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww your story was sweet and good i really liked it
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
finally!! someone did an Ash/ Gary lemon!! go you!
that was a really wierd style of wrting though... and i\'m impressed! it worked! big time!!
though those little wierd voices in Ash\'s head were... scary...
that was a really wierd style of wrting though... and i\'m impressed! it worked! big time!!
though those little wierd voices in Ash\'s head were... scary...
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought that the story was absolutely beautiful and romantic. I don\'t think Gary should have left Ash, I mean after he made love to him in all. I think he should stayed with him. I also think that they make such a beautiful couple too, I hope that you write chapter 2 real soon, because I can\'t wait to finish reading it.
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September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All together now....AWW. I really enjoyed this!! Keep up the great work...ermm...AIM RPs? I wub you! *tears, glomps*
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June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! That was sooo cute....*wipes her tears* lol
Seriously though...That was an awesome story...
~KIM~
Seriously though...That was an awesome story...
~KIM~
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June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a cute story, it was pretty good. Just a few minor things though...
~Gary and Ash are kind of OoC in this fic. The whole bit at the end was very OoC, and in the beginning.
~The sex scene was pretty good, but I don\'t think that Gary would be as loving as he was to Ash.
~When you write stories by way of IM conversation, it\'s a little confusing and kind of hard to follow.
Overall, it was good, but be sure to take those things into consitiontion the next time you write a fic.
~Gary and Ash are kind of OoC in this fic. The whole bit at the end was very OoC, and in the beginning.
~The sex scene was pretty good, but I don\'t think that Gary would be as loving as he was to Ash.
~When you write stories by way of IM conversation, it\'s a little confusing and kind of hard to follow.
Overall, it was good, but be sure to take those things into consitiontion the next time you write a fic.
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May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I DO hope there is another chapter or story. This is great!
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April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::eye twitch:: Are you ever going to continue this, or not? **Glomp** Thanks for telling me about this site!!! I think I\'ll ...o...once I have other stories written........^____^
Lara: o_o; LK is a little.........wierd today. I think it\'s because she\'s 1) not feeling 100% (alot of dizzyness) and 2)..............uh.......I have no other excuse.....Oh, right...It\'s just her. -_-\'\'
LK: ::grin:: ::wince:: Head-ache......@.@
Lara:...................I......plead insanity for my *dear* hikari....................::sweat drop:: **thwack** ::hit by shoe:: Oo WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!
LK: ::blinkblink:: I didn\'t do it!!!
Lara: Then *who* did?!?
LK: ::points at yami Bakura::
Y. Bakura: ::sneaking away, snickering::
Lara: Where do you think *you\'re* going?!
Y. Bakura: ::runs away, Lara hot on his tracks::
Lara: GET BACK HERE!!!!
Y. Bakura: Meheheheheheheh~!!!
LK: Oo A true psycho.............. Oh, gomen Klepty-chan for the wacky review....I\'m seriously out of it tonight.......::pauses:: And don\'t kill me for calling you Klepty-chan~!!!! Please? ::runs away to write Inuyasha ficcy::
Lara: o_o; LK is a little.........wierd today. I think it\'s because she\'s 1) not feeling 100% (alot of dizzyness) and 2)..............uh.......I have no other excuse.....Oh, right...It\'s just her. -_-\'\'
LK: ::grin:: ::wince:: Head-ache......@.@
Lara:...................I......plead insanity for my *dear* hikari....................::sweat drop:: **thwack** ::hit by shoe:: Oo WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!
LK: ::blinkblink:: I didn\'t do it!!!
Lara: Then *who* did?!?
LK: ::points at yami Bakura::
Y. Bakura: ::sneaking away, snickering::
Lara: Where do you think *you\'re* going?!
Y. Bakura: ::runs away, Lara hot on his tracks::
Lara: GET BACK HERE!!!!
Y. Bakura: Meheheheheheheh~!!!
LK: Oo A true psycho.............. Oh, gomen Klepty-chan for the wacky review....I\'m seriously out of it tonight.......::pauses:: And don\'t kill me for calling you Klepty-chan~!!!! Please? ::runs away to write Inuyasha ficcy::