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for What\'s goin\' on?

by chilli

person Lady Bipolar
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohmigosh! totally hot! i couldn't stop laughing at the trios reaction to Carrot's attire. is this a one shot? pls dont let it be. pl pls pls make a sequel i'm begging you!! loved it ;)
person Dark Angel
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*laughing histerically*
That was sooo funny!
Their reactions to what Marron and Carrot were saying were so funny.
You did a good job making it sound like they were actually doing something.
I was starting to wonder...what the heck's going on?
Good job!
person Bard's Apprentice
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, that's hilarious!!!!
u soooo need to write more chapters! i'm sure u can come up with more crazy misunderstandings! ^_^
person HolyMistress
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. First time I thought that he was giving him a shot or something because that's what I mostly read when it has something like this. I didn't think Marron was making Carrot wear CLOTHING! You sure had me fooled. But I like how you ended it. Now all us fangirls will be able to go along with our fantasies and pretend whatever happened in the room was what our fantasies made us think. Really good and funny! Loved it a lot.
person Sarryn
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL

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