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by chilli

person Sara Jaye
schedule May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Carrot. ;_;
person Sara Jaye
schedule May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww! ^^
person goldmund
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow...i liked it. i love this pairing, and it\'s so hard to find a fic about them.
so first of all, thank you so much for writing about them. i loved the way you explored carrot\'s thoughts. the first part of this fic was just amazing. i cannot believe that he talked to himself that way. it showed a lot about him...and it made his talk in the second fic very reasonable and understandable.
i loved how marron talked to him as well. it would be nice if you could write what happens after this fic. afterall, carrot did say that they will go to a city with a bed and a lock. :) (if you ever write a lemon fic about them, please let carrot be the one on top. please?)
i am also glad that you incorporated \"I am Beautiful\" in here. i think it fit really well. especially since there is that kissing scene between two men.
anyhow, i really liked this fic! plewritwrite more!

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