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IT\'S SO SWEET! *waff**waff**waff* I loved it! You should totally wright more!

I liked this story! I\'m happy for Kenshin. But to me, holding your feelings in is even better. That way you can let them go at the right moment. The time YOU feel is right. Sometimes you may need help too, and usually, it\'s from the one you love. I should know. One of my friends is going through this. I loved the story. Hope you create more like this. =^-^= -Myuh!

Being a big K+K fan, I would like 2 say that this story was truly beautiful. This is one of the best fics I read and I would like 2 congratulate you for your effort.. stay inspired and please write more soon!

Luv petunia

I only ressently discovered the existance of this site, and gods i\'m happy i did so! Your story is well writen but a bit, how could i say that.. um.. just a little bit too fluffy for my own taste. But don\'t get me wrong! It\'s good, its just that i\'m having a hard time with the \'darling\' \'love\' and such. You know, the usual endearment of lovers... sigh. Maybe it\'s just a wierd thing with my brain. But it was a good lemon, and you did kept the characters relatively in there own personallity. I would just propose something to you. Making love is not only a man touching a woman, altho Kaoru did let her hands wonder a bit, i feel that she did not touched enough. Or maybe it\'s just me... Also, the touching is not only a hand thing, you can touch with your arms, your lips, your cheeks, your legs, your feet and whatever other body part. Love making is a beautiful thing that, to us humans, is a way to express feelings that are far too strong to place word to discribe. It\'s body langage in all its wonderful self. Try and work on those point. But, and i must say it again, it was a great lemon, and no one is perfect. There\'s always place for more K/K love, always ^-^
Best regards
Evil Karyta

I liked it, that I.
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In some places, however, I found it to move a little to rapidly, but all in all i liked the way you had Kenshin & Kaoru come together, their pent up emotions finally breaking free into a dazzling moment of passion. . .hopefully to last a lifetime, ne?

^_~

Chiruken

Beautifully written! Great job! very descriptive!

Once again, you have managed to amaze me with your writing skills. That was a beautiful story with one of my favorite anime. You hto lto let me know when you write more stories about Inuyasha and Ruruoin Kenshi. I probably misspelled that, but you know who I\'m talking about. LOL

VEry Beautiful. It is a lovely story with the perfect mix of lust and love.
Thank you for write it

WOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW THATS HOW FANFICTIONS ARE SUP TO TO BE LIKE!!!!!!