rate_review Reviews

It wasn't terrible. Some parts were very erotic, and yet the first part seemed very OOC for almost everyone. I suppose since it's an alternate universe, that's expected, but there seemed to be something missing. Maybe it's because I wasn't entirely sure what the plot was supposed to be. Or rather, that the story sort of deviated from the plot given at the beginning.

I much preferred the second part, although part of that might be the fact that I don't know anything about Vandread. Anyway, it seemed more believable than the first part. See, as I read it, although I didn't know anything about the anime it was supposed to be about, before long I understood the premise of said anime. And that's the sign of a good writer.

I know you'll probably never finish the story (it's so old), but I just thought I'd let you know that someone read it.