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WOW THIS WAS AWSOME, you got their characters down and that\'s hard to do! and the lemon was superb!!!!! wow i realy wish you would do a sequel if you did i would love you forever!!! so if you could find it in your heart to do a sequel well cookies all around!!!

your number one fan puff!

Very well written. Good choice of pairings. I think the connection might have taken a while longer to piece together but it\'s a great bit of angsty bondage.

ooo, Hatori in bed~! *gushes*

Nice story. I really liked how you didn\'t just have smut, how you developed a relationship and even though this is a one-shot you made sure the history was there and it wasn\'t just about sex. ^^It was very well done, and this comes from a die-hard slash fan. ^^ I may have to branch out into het now. This story has given me the courage *fist upraised*

VERY good fanfic hehe =) good language good suspense etc juss very very good!

You\'re a wonderful author, but the run-on sentences in your stories are driving me nuts!!! 3 sentences in your first paragraph took up 9 rows. You should try dividing up your sentences or cutting them.

For some reason, I think there should be more to this.


Maybe its because I would LOVE to see Hana-chan\'s reaction to Akito. Maybe because I\'m a sucker for Hatori/Hanajima stories.



Maybe I\'m just weird.

It\'s a good story. I really liked it.

I must confess I\'m an avid Hatori x Saki fan. T_T unfortunately there are not that many fics out there that stars this two. So guess my surprise when I found your story I was like totally blow away. Man what I wouldn’t give to be in saki\'s place. Talk about Yummy. ~_^

Can we hope for more chapter or a new story or stories regarding our favorite pair . ^_^

You know, I actually really really like this pairing! Their reactions turn out to be quite in character, and thus very believable. The lemon is also scrumptious. I think this story could actually be continued quite well -- housing the reactions of the Shigure household as well as a confrontation with Akito. I can\'t see Hana just being passive in the way that Kana was; I think she\'d stand up for Hatori in front of Akito: perhaps we see what Hanajima\'s electric wave is really capable of? I must admit that the mental image of such a scene is very cool. Consider continuing this one! Job well done!

Please made a sequel to this one, or even better; write more chapters! Or write more Saki/Hatori fics! This is the greatest couple eva and nobody writes about it! And I think that the thing with Saki being tied down during ... their little sessions absolutely fits the concept of this coupling! And they definitely seem to me like a couple with a healthy sex life with some obscenities... >_<;; ANYWAYS,

I. Love. This. Coupling. And. Your. Story.

So please write more on this subject, k?

Luv\'n\'Stuff,

Lady E

Sorry, AFF.n didn\'t show all of my review. *grumbles* Anyways, what I wanted to say is that I love your story, the coupling is the greatest ever, the concept of Saki being tied down fits and the lemon in such a fic is absolutely necessary. You made a great job, and I really hope that you add a sequel, or another chapter, or write a whole new fic about those two. But I really think that the domination in their sex-life is a must. It absolutely fits in the picture!!! Good luck, Lady E