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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to say i love your writing style i have been looking for the continuation (is that a word? no matter) of your stories \"something new\" (wk) and its not on here did you never finish it? please do it was cute. thank you,
DawnStar
DawnStar
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!
When are you going to update it? What a cliff hanger to leave it on...!
When are you going to update it? What a cliff hanger to leave it on...!
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue writing and give us the next chapter as fast as possible!!!
This story sounds really cool!!!
This story sounds really cool!!!
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know I reviewed this at FFN but your story wasn\'t there anymore when I went back to read it. Oh well, it\'s still here and I enjoy just as much! The blowjob was freaking hilarious and dirty You You have to write more of this soon. I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter. Keep it up!
~CT
~CT
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally wonderful fic.... plsplspls update real soon!
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!!!!
Adddddd
Adddddd
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My! Finally! An update! Great chapter!! Update again soon, pleeeease..
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa O_O That was a very ... interesting read. And quite funny, at that.
For some reason, I particularly liked the last 3 lines of chapter 2. Hehe XD Poor Ken...
More please!!!
For some reason, I particularly liked the last 3 lines of chapter 2. Hehe XD Poor Ken...
More please!!!
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Deena
....I love you.
^^; Sorry that was a little odd (downright creepy), but that\'s the only way I can express my undying gratitude to you for writing a Brad/Ken fic. I mean, your vocablary, your diction, is amazing. And grammer mistakes? Zero. What can I say? I really like someone who knows how to use the English language. As for the story itself; I find it quite interesting that you made Ken the victimized straight man---it\'s definitely refreshing to read a slave fic where the victim doesn\'t harbour secret sexual feelings for the antagonist. And really different to see Ken being, well, straight. Really straight. Not \'I secretly love Aya\' straight. I have read some other stories of yours elsewhere (BnD archive)and may I say you are a very talented authouress (either you or someone you share a screen-name with; if you are the person I\'m thinking of I\'m going to thank you here and now for writing \"Perfect Sin\" which I love dearly,and compelled me to read more of your work as follows [or as listed in the BnD archive, which I\'m looking at right now...] \"Dancing Towards Obscurity\", \"Waking Onto Lanterns Bright\", \"Raspberry and Lime Shampoo\" and \"Moon Mist and Autumn Puppets\". If you are not this Deena then I apologize greatly for being spaztic, and may I say you are an excellent writer also! ^^;) Keep up the good work, I\'m eager for more!
Thank You~!
-Cami the Homicidal (actually quite happy at the moment) Bunny ^^
And yes I can be a little fangilrish (rabid-fangirlish, even?), but hey, I\'m a reading nerd and I hold my favourite authors in very high regards.... Heh, I don\'t mean to scare anyone, maybe one day I\'ll have fangirls of my own O_o
....I love you.
^^; Sorry that was a little odd (downright creepy), but that\'s the only way I can express my undying gratitude to you for writing a Brad/Ken fic. I mean, your vocablary, your diction, is amazing. And grammer mistakes? Zero. What can I say? I really like someone who knows how to use the English language. As for the story itself; I find it quite interesting that you made Ken the victimized straight man---it\'s definitely refreshing to read a slave fic where the victim doesn\'t harbour secret sexual feelings for the antagonist. And really different to see Ken being, well, straight. Really straight. Not \'I secretly love Aya\' straight. I have read some other stories of yours elsewhere (BnD archive)and may I say you are a very talented authouress (either you or someone you share a screen-name with; if you are the person I\'m thinking of I\'m going to thank you here and now for writing \"Perfect Sin\" which I love dearly,and compelled me to read more of your work as follows [or as listed in the BnD archive, which I\'m looking at right now...] \"Dancing Towards Obscurity\", \"Waking Onto Lanterns Bright\", \"Raspberry and Lime Shampoo\" and \"Moon Mist and Autumn Puppets\". If you are not this Deena then I apologize greatly for being spaztic, and may I say you are an excellent writer also! ^^;) Keep up the good work, I\'m eager for more!
Thank You~!
-Cami the Homicidal (actually quite happy at the moment) Bunny ^^
And yes I can be a little fangilrish (rabid-fangirlish, even?), but hey, I\'m a reading nerd and I hold my favourite authors in very high regards.... Heh, I don\'t mean to scare anyone, maybe one day I\'ll have fangirls of my own O_o
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have two words to describe this fic. Kick. Ass.
-jack
-jack