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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not the worst I\'ve read by any means, not the best. You may want to look up the word koi on an official site. As far as I, a gaijin, know, koi is the Japanese word for the carp (as in the fish). If you\'re right, then I apologize.
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know, Serena and Darien\'s Japenese names are Usagi and Mamoru. Or you could use usako and mamo-chait means the same thing. By the way, I like your story.
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re right! That is a pointless lemon between Serena and Darien! I like it! Personally, I don\'t care if they screw around and have kids like bunnies as long as its got the good parts!
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! KEEP THEM COMING!!!!!1
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May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LUV U!!! Oh yeah this is a review thingy....I luv ur stories alaya ^^. They\'re sooo cool! I wanna see serena and Raye ^_^
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May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is realy good come on put the next chapter up please
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May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice story. Very lemony (full of lemon). I have a question how do iget my stories published after I finish making them?