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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update soon pLease
schedule
August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
okie dokie. i\'m gowin ta put thiyis as liytely as possible. you suck really bayd. You shouldn\'t eyven be writing period. yer sentence structure sucks hard liyke babies suckin on thar momma\'s titties. iyits liyke:
\"Rei went to the room, got undressed and then started licking his cock. She then got up and got the whipped cream and came back and told him to spray it on her so she would taste betterer.\"
to be ceyteeytely honest, i don\'t giyve two shits about this story. maybe you should think about Hooked on Phonics or, something.
\"Rei went to the room, got undressed and then started licking his cock. She then got up and got the whipped cream and came back and told him to spray it on her so she would taste betterer.\"
to be ceyteeytely honest, i don\'t giyve two shits about this story. maybe you should think about Hooked on Phonics or, something.
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You seriously suck at righting lemons.... I\'ve read better on ff.net... Even before they made aff.net.... I\'m sorry but I hope i\'m not the only one who is telling you this because you TRULY DO SUCK @ RIGHTING LEMONBYE!BYE!
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July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You need to do more lemons and chapters and make it longer
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May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are all welcome to review and say what you wanna say.Im not gonna go to your house and kill you just cuz you said it was horrible. Bye Everyone and stay tuned for the next chapter!:):):)
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December 20, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I hate to say it, but your virginity is showing. Try again after you\'ve had some sex yourself.