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for Deadly Desire

by Shadiyaray

schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i have to admit, that was very different and very hot! i feel so sorry for the horsey... poor widdle horsey... nice touch of vouyerism by the way... i'm only complaining about the numerous typos... is that a system glitch in AFF?
person yui
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like ur story it\'s realy asweome
good job
cya
person VejitaGurl
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really luv your story and major props on ur lemons they were great and i really luved them. And plus they were very long you had very good ideas... Yes well ::ahem:: hope you write others fics as good as this or more ill be waiting!!
^~vejitagurl~^
person Ryu
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*melt melt melt* gah! story,in love with! *in a good mood* I think you should have actually killed Kaoru,but I\'m like that. Aoshi at the wedding was GREAT! Your sex scenes were just mmmmmmmmmm. I showed one to my boyfriend ^_~ he Very nearly ravished me lol. Your plot was very good and your writing style is well put together. I am laughing my ass off at Shishio though. ^_^
person puffin
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. And as always I am sad that it ended. I know that all good things come to end but still makes me sad. It was a good st I h I hope any and all of your other stories are just as good. Keep up the good work.
person catti-dono
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its about time for a new kenshin and kauro story, yes?
person lordanhur
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful love it i cryed for a seconds there when i thought she had died. perfect mix of smut and plot
person Aden
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, my soul is relieved now. I almost cried when you said Kaoru was dead. After all of that, I didn\'t really think you\'d kill her off just like that. I was so happy to discover she wasn\'t. Yay! This is by far the best lemon I have read, you have great descriptions and the situations are just....well suited, I suppose. I hope you\'ll write some more and I\'ll come check them out.
person MZ.AMbER EYES
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww...[stares at computer screen for a while]....awww.... lol, that was so amazingly sweet! isn\'t kenshin the sweetheart in the end... [...] AWWW..... haha, i had to say that again. that was the best romantic fic i have read in a long time. hope to see more soon, and you seem to do a lovely job on lemons [wink] [wink] haha, anyways, i LOVED it!
person Tanya
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this fic! I was searching through the RK ff list when I saw this... and decided to read it! Boy, am I glad that I did! You\'ve done a fantastic job with this story! *hands over a box of cookies* My gift to you! ^o^ Ja! Tanya

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