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for Deadly Desire

by Shadiyaray

person call me Kikyo
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved your fanfic. The whole idea of Karou being captive to Kenshin is really, really imaginative. I think the only other fanfics authors I like as much as you are churiken and linay(her Broken Pieces has the same idea as your story) Please write another one like this. You have no idea what kind of kenshin fan I am. My friends are going nuts. They keep trying to test me on him. Anyway, I\'ll be reading lots of your works, so update. ead ead at god-like speed(seriously)
person megitsune
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg don\'t ever do that again! i was holding my breath the whole time and was like this(-) (the thing in parenthesis(sp?) is how close i was) close to crying cuz i thot dat u killed her. but u didn\'t! yay! i was soooo happy. write more fanfics that one was really good. well ja ne .
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Keep up the good work! Write another story!
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LOVED YOUR STORY AND I CAN\'T WAIT TO READ ANOTHER ONE LIKE. SO KEEP IT UP. WRITE SOME MORE STORIES LIKE THIS.
person FISH
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*does happy dance*
YYYEEEEEEEE!!! Happy Days! A y Eny Ending*gra*grabs Author and dances*
person Shelly
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story!! You definitely had me on my seat\'s edge. ^_^ Love it! And I will be rereading it!
person Naruke & Shikamaru
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Naruke: nooooo! it ended!
Shikamaru: ahhh, happy endings. noo muo mushy, but not too angsty.
person Babsie
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY
LOVE LOVE LOVE

the marriage was funny...I can imagine Aoshi fainting huahuahua
and kenshin with a nerveus attack...Hilarious

about kamatari become a man...well he/she would do a handsome guy.

if you find some time do do a sequel...don´t think toomuch about..just do it. :-)


Congratulations
Fantastic work


person STACEY
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OKAY OKAY...GOOD JOB THERE. YOU GOT ME THINKING SHE WAS DEAD (MY MOUTH WAS AGAPE WHEN I READ THAT SHE HAD BEEN STABBED). WELL, I LOVE THE ENDING. COULDN\'T BELIEVE YOU PULLED THAT SHIT OFF, BUT THAT WAS A NICE ONE. BY THE WAY, GREAT STORY! I LOVE IT!
person Fish
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*holds sword to your throat*
HOW DARE YOu!!!!!! YARGH!! They Were Supposed to live hapilly ever after!! YYYYAARRRGGHHH!!!!!!
and You hurt Kenshin!!!!!!
But I guess If Kaoru\'s out of the picture,,,,,,,,,,Kenshin will be mine!!
*huggles him*
Great story! And I hope to read more of them!

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