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for Deadly Desire

by Shadiyaray

person Kaoru Himura!
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! that was so cliff-hangerishh hahaha( :| i invented that word lol) please update soon i really wanna see what will happen! i cant believe this story has turned so interesting i cant stop reading it and theres only one last chappie to come , please write a sequel i cant live without it!!! hahaha im exagerating , yes, but its true i get so involved with stories that when they are over im kinda disappointed id really love a sequel and im sure that it would be as great as this ficcie!! make us readers happy nd update soon!!
see ya
Kaoru!
person Babsie
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know...I can´t believe that you will let me wondering what happen to kaoru...She isn´t dead! ...are she?
I love your fanfic until now.
Please Update soon.
person ?????
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please,Please!! (times 1,000,000,000,000) /udate really soon!!
person two*different*people
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
so...do you edit a lot out? cause i really couldn\'t tell the difference from this version and the ff.net version...maybe cause i only read two random chapters ^_^ but yeah. it\'s still a great story, either version. laterz!
person sliver_dragon
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh u have to update soon plz i love this story. it gives me inspration. lol
person Kurokumo
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean only two more chapters to go?! You can\'t end it so soon! I forbid it!! *points finger* How dare you even say that!!!!!!
person holly
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to say that i really like you fic and i hope that you update it really soon..
person Kaoru Himura!
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapter and the plot of this is story is every minute getting better!! i hope you update really really soon because i really want to read the end of this , please let kaoru and kenshin love each other hahaha and live a happy life together. i hope we are able to read next chappie soon see ya! Kaoru!
person Cat
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, nice!
Two chapters to go? Aww...I really don\'t want this to end. Will there be more lemon? Please (gets on the ground)?
person Everqueen
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fanfic. I can\'t wait to finish reading it. oooo, only two more chapters to go, don\'t leave us in suspense.

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