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Sakura: Me LOVED chapter 5, what with the lemon and all....
Sasuke: Sakura, you\'re such a perv. ANYWAYS, I think it\'s a wonderful story, and the lemons add to it.
Sakura: See, you\'re a perv too cause you\'re saying the lemons were good!!!
Sasuke: Did not!
Sakura: Did too!
Sasuke: Did not
Sakura: Did too!
*and the fight goes on and on....*

You write well. I enjoyed reading this more than I thought I would, if only because this is an AU (not in the original storyline, like I like most stories). I REALLY like the horse bit! That was a great lemon scene! Whew! My only critiques are nit-picky. See the Writing Tips section on this site, read the one about common words microsoft spell check won\'t pick up (Loose instead of lose, speed instead of sped, captor instead of captives.) I found that really helpful.

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THATS WAS THE BEST LEMON FIC I HAVE EVER READ ABOUT KENSIN....PLEASE UPDATE SOON VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!YOU VERYVERY GOOD AT THIS

Hey! ^_^ I just want to let you know that I\'ve beening ing your fic, and I look forward to the next installment. I also want to say that I loved your comment about it being amazing the things a twenty-four year old woman ws gos gone w/o a man for two years can think off. It was great. I can so relate. All you have to do is add a year to the age. Well, I just wanted to lend my support to my fellow grad student and fanfic author. Take your time with you fic and do well in school. Trust me, I know it\'s hard to keep regular updates on fics when you have so much school. But, school comes first. Well, keep up the great work, and I\'ll look forward to reading what you have install for Kenshin and Kauro in the next chapter. ^_^

I like it! And can\'t wait for an update. Things were getting a little steamy! Please update soon.

I wouldn\'t really say your reviewers were telling you how to write your story, but merely giving you constructive criticism. That\'s what reviews are for. Getting your work critiqued is a definite part of writing. I\'m completely aware that there is a distinct difference between a review and a flame. It seems some chick named Cindy did flame you. I don\'t think Hatchan and Rotten Meat flamed you though, or tried to tell how to write your fic. I think they just gave you a few helpful hints, and like I said \'constructive criticism\'. Out of all your reviewers, they seemed to be the most attentive readers, as in they weren\'t just reading this fic for the sex scenes. If you can\'t accept honest reviews like their\'s, then don\'t ask for reviews at all. Besides, judging by your author\'s notes, it seems they may have even helped you out by pointing out all your errors...since you said you were working on fixing them. When you post a fic on the internet, some idiots will most likely flame you, even though you probably don\'t deserve it. I won\'t comment on your errors, because you seem to be dedicated to making this fic the best you can. So keep writing, and I hope you understand that of some of your reviewers are trying to help you out on more important elements of your story, other than rating a fuck scene.

wow!! this is a great story up to know! who was the person outside the window saying that this would be kenshin\'s fall? pleas eupdate soon, need i say more!

Hey,
Nice story, great plot! Don\'t listen to what others tell you about the plot, it\'s great! Keep it up!
Sky

Oh, by the way, a 10! Add another lemon please! Thank you!
Sky

Sorry! One more note! When I said don\'t listen to what others tell you about the plot, I meant people who criticize your story and try to tell you how you should write the characters when it\'s your story. Sorry! This is my last comment!