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I do like your story, and I hope that you will update soon.
-Phèdre

I have to agree with Hatchan and Cindy...though I\'ll try not to be as cruel as my buddy Cindy was. The plot to this fic doesn\'t seem to be picking up the pace, but you sure have plenty of sex. And yes, I\'ve seen many spelling, grammer and punctuationtaketakes. And you do have many, many run on sentencpleaplease correct that. Plus I have to agree that a woman (no respectable woman at least) would be so quick as to hop in bed, oh excuse me...on horseback with some guy, when they\'ve barely spoken a sentence to each other. A virgin would probably be quite hesitant in losing her virginity to anyone other than her husband, because in that era, she wouldn\'t be suitable for marriage if she did. Hell, she\'d be considered tarnished goods, and lower than a prostitute. There\'s barely any dialogue, or interaction between Kenshin and Kaoru, other than fingering and fucking. This fic does remind me of several romance novels, what with Kaoru begging Kenshin for sex.That poor goddamn horse, where are the Animal Rights Activists when you need them.

I\'d definetly give the lemon a 10!!! :-) This is a great story, please continue!! Oh & the second question... I don\'t think that it\'s possible to have too many lemons!!!... LOL:-)

ACK! DON\'T STOP!!! I love Hitokiri Battosai. I really like this fic a lot. please continue. although, the sex on the horse was pretty weird. i mean...a horse? but it\'s really good. i like how you brought out kenshin\'s character. I think that your fic is the best hitokiri fic that i have read. he\'s dark, swift, mysterious, HORNY, sexually skilled :), handsom, short temper, serious, and just so damxy. xy. if he was here right now and had the attitude that you have given him. i would strip and lay down on the floor for him in seconds. well, i would jump on him, strip him and myself, and then have sex with him for a whole week. but then i\'d probably get killed. sooooo....KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!

On a scale of 1-10, definately a 10! Also, yes, you should put many more lemons in because you are great at writing them

I liked it, it wae fie first time I read where a girl lost her virginity on a horse. I you can come up with another good one like that then please add another lemon. Also, don\'t take long in updating the story..please.
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Enjoying seeing the anime itself. Like reading your story.

This stor rea really good and I can\'t wait to read more. The lein tin the chapter Finally was really good and I think you should write another one in this story. I can\'t wait to read what happens next, so please hurry up and finish this. Keep writing.

More lemon!!!!

I think your lemon was a 10!!! And I know this sounds REALLY perverted, but NO that is definitly NOT enough lemons! (told you it was perverted!)