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Poor Taichi! You hardly ever see stories about Taichi getting raped, it\'s always Yamato. So this is a pleasant change! This was good, I\'m going to read the rest now ^-^

hey, a hospital isnt always the thing that people think of to do. sometimes, if youre upset enough, you feel that you cant truat ANYONE enough to hand over someone that you care about. *ish a sap fer the romantic stuff* ^.^;;; i thought the story was quite lovely, almost had ta shead a tear there. and love the song ya picked out too.

It\'s nice....heh heh heh...write more...heh heh heh...hgahahahhahha

This is a great story!

I\'m not normally one that likes stories like this one. But let me tell you that I cried while reading this. You wrote this so very well that you got a person who doesn\'t cry over stories to cry. You did very very well. You set the mood and played the characters very well. I would love to read more of your work and I hope one day to see your work on a book shelf.

are you going to continue with this story? If you do so, I cant wait till
the next part, this is G-R-E-A-T!!!!!! good job! ^_^

yeah i think you should make End All a continuation thing instead of just a one- shot thing, dont you? well i really liked it a lot! it was so sad and stuff! i mean i want to know what might happen afterwards! like what matt would do to miaki and if he EVER thinks of taking tai to that little building called the hospital maybe??? yeah. and i want to see how tai\'s and matt\'s relationship develops too. like how they will get to maybe a sexual relationship latter on? how it might effect tai and how matt deals with it all. well thats just my thoughts and feelings on the story! like i said before it was really great! good work! but if you should take my plea for a continuation of chapters to come i will be ever greatful and happy that you did! well good luck on your other stories you might be writing! im sure they will be and/or are as great as this on i have just finished reading! ja!

Oh wow. I LOVED this story. You are an amazing writer. Very dark, but very good. You write Tai and Yamato so well. Write some more fics!
Oh, by the way, the song is \"Jumper\" by Third Eye Blind. I love that song and I was very impressed with the way you integrated it into the story. It fit so perfectly.
It was almost as if the song was made for your fic. Now I\'m totaly rambling. But so, so good! I love it.

Wow. It was written well, the emotions were vivid... so very sad. Good work!

that was really good, its just that the japanese names confuse me. but i understood it in the end. great job! that was really good.^_^