rate_review Reviews

I liked it alot. I thought you were ending it at chapter 2. lol I have to say I do like the additional one sided Luffy crush. Mmm Zoro. Lol. Now I wanna go read through the reviews to see what it was that caused the little rant hehe.

I like the way you write. If One Peice was yaoi I\'d say this would be pretty close. Now if only I could find a fanfic that has Hawkeye/Zoro stuff then I\'d be set ^^.
I hope you write more of this soon. I really enjoyed it.

Amazing!!!!...just WOW!
I have to ask, was Sanji\'s sickness you can truly get?

*Nosebleeds* OMG Chopper is too sexy. Go you!

Yeah, you finally updated. Poor Sanji...(almost said Sanzo there..., which is why I shouldn\'t try to write Saiyuki and One Piece at the same time, it ends up weird....) Very nice. I\'m so happy you updated. You do realize that I will stalk you forever, right? Love the emotions...and Zoro showing he not such a bad guy, and a slightly perverted Luffy...love it. ^^v

A well written piece of work. This is probably one of the best post-rape fics I\'ve ever read. Although there were some minor mistakes (as a previous reviewer pointed out, apparently) it\'s still great. The idea was good, the writing itself was terrific, and the characterization was decent. Sanji might be a tiny bit girly, but then he really is in the series anyway and besides, he has the perfect reason to act emotional. Zoro is also just a tiny bit... well, unusually sensitive... but it fits the story very well and saves us some very awkward and frankly painful moments, not that you avoided those (for which I applaude you). I also liked Luffy and in particular Robin\'s characterization in here, not to mention Chopper.
The fact that you delt with such a sensitive subject without making it too corny or unrealistic is great. Very few authors really get through a fic like this without dissolving into mushy \"feel the healing power of my cock!\" post-rape crapfests. You managed to avoid that very, very well. I like how Sanji deals with it here: how private and ashamed and freaked out he is, how he DOESN\'T manage to stick with Zoro the first time...

The only thing I would say was a little wierd was how Sanji reacted after Chopper was finished with him: he suddenly changes so much that it becomes strange, even though you mention alcohol and such it still seems too wierd to me. I would have imagined that he\'d at least escape to the kitchen to recuperate for a while, instead of quickly deciding to go after Zoro again, not to mention trying to get in his pants... not to mention that whole \"screwing on the deck\" thing... which I would think at least Sanji would be too embaressed to do (although he wasn\'t in control, so...)

You are a fucking genius!
I just love it, Sanji and Zoro are such a sweet couple
i\'d have to say outta all the One Piece fanfics this is the best one i\'ve ever read
Please update! i beg of you
Pretty please

you\'re alive! and you updated! im in shock! i can\'t stop using exclamation points! i luv yur story!

awwww.....dont listen to those LOSERs!!!!!!.....

do whatever you like with ZoroSanji fic.....

if those LOSERs want to write crap...they SHOULD write their own FREAKIN crap....

just remember that this fic writing is for you....not for them shit heads ^__^...

hehehe...i like this and its getting more cute....

i love what you do to Sanji....

SANJI<3<3

I love this story! Tell yer nay sayers to walk the plank!


It\'s so wonderful!

^w^ Is Zoro gonna totally wail of Luffy?

I\'ve been following your works for a couple of years now, maybe more, and I\'ve always loved your style of writing. Your character description and their subsequent development, your descriptions of events past, present and those that are to come, they\'re all so wonderfully portrayed it leaves me with very little to say in a very good way. The first fic written by you was of the Weiß Kreuz fandom, \'I Hate You\', back when ff.net still allowed for NC-17 posts, and I\'ve followed you from there to mediaminer (which IMHO suck eggs) to here. I read more of your stuff over the years and I especially love \'Unlimited\' and this one, \'All the Truth is on the Table\'.

Now in so many fandoms, OP\'s Zoro and Sanji\'s dynamics really struck a chord in me. I feel this pair have such potential for a profound relationship, and I\'m not alone in this, judging by the general quality of fanfics written based on these two as a couple and/or pairing. AND among these high quality fics, yours is one of which shines the brightest to me since not only am I already partial to your style, I\'m also very much in love with this pairing.

And I especially love the strand this particular story is on. Please, if you are able, would you consider continuing this someday? Like a sequel of sorts? I like the way things are portrayed in this story so much it\'s left me with a good feeling on one side and an empty one on another since it\'s finished and done, but yet have the potential for more. There\'s this \'It\'s not enough\' feeling inside of me.......i keep wondering what will happen AFTER since those two\'s r\'ship definitely be nothing short of a bumpy ride for them, and yet so beautiful.....................................

I really liked this story, both chapters; the characters convince and it\'s a nice mix of everything... from light bickering to hot kitchen encounters and traumatic pasts... Very, very nice. I\'ve recently taken a liking in these two guys, and this is the first time to read something that comes close to how they would deal with each other.
And I agree with your notes from the first chapter (about being on guard not to confuse Sanzo and Sanji). Sigh. The stubborn,foul mouthed blondes do have something irresistible... ^_^