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by tareacel

schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pant..pant..pant.. Omi, Ken sex...wow! Great club you described my dear. I loved all the details. Ah so Aya found out something interesting.....well it was about time! LOL. I hope it was an eye opener for him. Great job!
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I am officially on fire...call 911 get a hose a bucket something! Wow.. I love how you are giving all 4 Weiss a fair share of the attention. I hope Aya dances..I might pass out. More! Must read More!
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok you are going to kill me. First with Aya\'s dance. I adored how you started out with it being slow and seductive then as the music changed so did Aya. His dancing became more emotional and gave us a glimpse of his tortured soul. The one tear sliding down his cheek was masterful. Then Ken and Omi again......THUD!!
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I have officially died..Happy. That was so hot and fierce. Who would have thought that of Omi. I loved it! Now my fondest dream is to see him \"top\". Sleepy Aya...I want to cuddle him too. Ooh he put his head in Yohji\'s lap..Lovely.
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww post coital huggles and cuddles. Poor Aya! Then the mutual masterbation..ack you torture them so. Great job dear!
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeep! It has hit the fan now hasn\'t it? A fight. Oh man how are they going to fix this? Ooh a bit of angst..I love it!
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More Omi and Ken goodness...sigh. Omi is quite talented isn\'t he? The little minx! Oh Oh Poor Aya...That was so very sad when he was talking to his sister. (sob!)
He needs some love! (sniffle) Bravo dear!
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arrgghh....more sex...in the hallway! **sticks head in a bucket of ice** Hot and wicked, just the way I like it! Then they confronted Ran. I am surprised they are still standing..Aya\'s temper is legendary. I love how you balance emotion, plot, hot sex and wonderful dialogue and descriptions perfectly. Another incredible chapter.
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was stunning and emotionally powerful! Ran will either kiss him back or kill him. I will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter! I salute you! This fic is a refreshing change from the many angst, rape, torture fics out there. Not that angst is bad some of the best Weiss fics I have read have all those elements but a steady diet of them is not fun. BRAVO!!
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did I say you were evil? I am now convinced of it...Heh. Wonderful chapter my dear. Hell of a place to leave it though. I am so ready for some Yohji and Ran goodness. I loved the line about kissing in the rain. You ought to comission a picture for that scene. Try http://bishonenworks.com/index.htm
It is an awesome site! It is full of Weiss art. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Hugs
Amy

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