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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm... welll... let\'s see... What should I say? .... Oh. Yeah. I FRIGGIN\' LOVE IT!! *grins* I just now found this story and am wondering how in the world I never found it before... *blinks* Meh, anywayz, just wanted to say keep it comin\', and I hope you get tons of good reviews like you deserve. *nods* Now, onwards! *giggles*
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I waited WAY to much for you to write another chapter but I must say that it was worth the waiting. Keep the excellent work!
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! Absolutely beautiful! Fantastic! Marvellous! Beyond compare! *Sniffles* And so sweet! *Hugs little plushie dolls of Aya and Yohji* Awwwww, my babies are together and happy. At last.
Seriously though, fantastic story so far, I\'m absolutely loving the amount of detail you\'ve put in, and I think it\'s very in-character that it took Aya and Yohji this long to get together, although I wasn\'t thinking that at the time I assure you lol. And your constant requests for reviews have finally cracked me, as this is a far longer one than I normally do, but oh well! The lemon scene was very good, so no worries there, but I\'d be very interested in what you have planned for the morning after. And that thrice-goddamned mission.
Anyway, can\'t wait for the next chapter and I hope all that stuff with your family is sorted out. Love,
~Loki
Seriously though, fantastic story so far, I\'m absolutely loving the amount of detail you\'ve put in, and I think it\'s very in-character that it took Aya and Yohji this long to get together, although I wasn\'t thinking that at the time I assure you lol. And your constant requests for reviews have finally cracked me, as this is a far longer one than I normally do, but oh well! The lemon scene was very good, so no worries there, but I\'d be very interested in what you have planned for the morning after. And that thrice-goddamned mission.
Anyway, can\'t wait for the next chapter and I hope all that stuff with your family is sorted out. Love,
~Loki
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After a lemon that good, you won\'t hear me complaining about your absence. Welcome back and thanks for not giving up on your story. I\'ve really enjoyed what you\'ve done so far and I\'m looking forward to your next chapter.
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! WOW! WOW! That\'s all I have to say.
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is about damn time! ^_^ but I\'m glad you finally updated. It was worth the wait *grins*
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Yeah, well, it was about time. But THAT was intense. One of the best lemon scenes I\'ve read, no doubt. Your use of words and the way you describe things - especially Aya - is somehow smudged, in a good way.
I was surprised that you made this last two entire chapters. And the end of it, a bit used but so, so cute. Something that surprised me too was the position. I don\'t recall that I\'d never read a lemon scene when they do it like that. O.o Interesting.
And again, the sweet fluffiness of their gazes and touches and God, I\'m just so fond of this. *smiles* No matter what happens, I\'ll always be with this fic. I just love it.
I was surprised that you made this last two entire chapters. And the end of it, a bit used but so, so cute. Something that surprised me too was the position. I don\'t recall that I\'d never read a lemon scene when they do it like that. O.o Interesting.
And again, the sweet fluffiness of their gazes and touches and God, I\'m just so fond of this. *smiles* No matter what happens, I\'ll always be with this fic. I just love it.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is that the end?! No, no, no .... there needs to be more ... don\'t make me beg, onegai? I will beg, too, for another chapter. The whole thing is fantastic, I don\'t want it to end. And my God, it was hot. Is hot. Will continue to be hot. Arigatou gozaimasu, tareacel (bows, bows).
~Kenji
~Kenji
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thankyou thankyou thankyou for FINALLY updating. u have to finish it now. u have me addicted!!! *whimpers*
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Waves* Hi, it\'s Gwen from Animazement. I told you I\'d drop by and read your story, didn\'t I? And I did. Just now. The whole thing.
And I liked it. I\'m not usually a fan of these pairings (Aya/Omi forever!) but this is an exception. I really liked the descriptions and how the characters acted like they were actually men, instead of 12 year old girls. That was very welcome.
Minor complaint though. The way they all jumped into the relationships seemed rather rushed to me. It made for hot story telling, but was a bit too much \'Hey, we\'re in love! Great, let\'s go have hot, wild sex a day after we decide to go out!\'. Other than that, I really liked the story.
And I liked it. I\'m not usually a fan of these pairings (Aya/Omi forever!) but this is an exception. I really liked the descriptions and how the characters acted like they were actually men, instead of 12 year old girls. That was very welcome.
Minor complaint though. The way they all jumped into the relationships seemed rather rushed to me. It made for hot story telling, but was a bit too much \'Hey, we\'re in love! Great, let\'s go have hot, wild sex a day after we decide to go out!\'. Other than that, I really liked the story.