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for Gemstone Eyes

by tareacel

person VarenNeoRaven
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are an awesome writer, but a very VERY evil one. I think you have just become my greatest loved author. I love evil authors... just as long as they post the ENDING to the cliffhanger as some point.

Very well written. I like your use of language and words. You have done Weiss Proud. Great job, and keep up the good work.

~VarenNeoRaven
person Rena
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Taracel,

I love your story gemstone eyes so far...the characterizations are dead on, and the plot is definitely believable! You are a very gifted writer!

I know u wanted some input on the story...so, i think that ken and omi should somehow force the Yohji and Aya to talk by locking them up somewhere, or by encouraging Yohji to make a move...or, by kidnapping them and taking them to a deserted place, fun,ne?

Anyways, good luck, and hope to see a continuation soon.

~Rena
person Lee
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, yes ... it does suck *sniff* *glare*

But anyway a happy birthday and lots of presents
person Sexxi Twisted Angel
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!!!

But God damn...did you HAVE to cut it off at such a good part?? :P. Damn Kritiker *shakes fist at them* why do they have to come back and ruin Weiss\' happiness*pouts*. awww...Yohji all guarded and protecting his emotions in the chance that Aya reverts back to stoic-leader person. SOO Cute :D yay!! hopefully your play is a smashing success so that when you come back you make the lemon VERY lemony ;) :D. See ya!
person me
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
happy b-day thanks for updating i hope there\'s another real soon
person Mystik
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I quit. *sighs* It\'s so fucking good!!! And you better update soon!!O.o eeheheh ja ne!
person Cherokee
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this fic from the beginning and I absolutly ADORE it. Even tho Omi is a little over the top as a chibi hentai it works! But ifn you make me wait another 3-4 months for an update I\'m gonna be one grumpy wolf.
person V
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday, cliffies do suck, this chapter broke my heart and update ASAP please!
person Aura4
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im loving this story. I read the first 14 chapters in one night and then the last 10 tonight. Im sorry I didnt review earlier. *begs for forgivness* Anyway, this is one of the few really well thought out Weiss stories that I have read. You dont just create a story, but a whole atmosphere for the story, plot and characters to revolve in. I love it, the flow of events and multiple points of view are fluid and easliy understood. Definatly a 10!

~Aura4~
person MEEE~
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAUW, I read your story yesterday and it\'s AWSOME!!!!! Really, keep up the good work! You cAN\'T let down all your readers!

I didn\'t think it sucked, just quick-quick update sooooooon!

And happy birhtday! ya! you\'re aries, right-right??? happy-happy birthday!

I\'m waiting for the next chapter!<3

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