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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I want you to write more please im in need of it.
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u mean we get MORE!!!? O.O YEEEEEEEAAAAAA!
that was WAY hot. ^_^
that was WAY hot. ^_^
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww sweet, i love those two their sooooooooo cute together.
i Loved your description next chapter pwease! :)
Can\'t wait for more
***KittyQ***
i Loved your description next chapter pwease! :)
Can\'t wait for more
***KittyQ***
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is cute and what there is is very well written, only thing I could say is that maybe you should try to make the plot a little deeper next time. I think that generally stories like this are better if they have a little more detail to the plot, but hey as a first fanfiction it was really good. :)
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really beautiful wrighting+FAKE+YAOI= A VERY VERY HAPPY READER xD i love this fic because its not written like \"ryo walked over to the door, and said \"__\" and than __ blah blah blah.\"
it was so descriptive ^_^ i lyk your writing, and i\'m reading your next ficcie
it was so descriptive ^_^ i lyk your writing, and i\'m reading your next ficcie