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person Minako
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it.

Wow now that was So Serious love the kiss in it but what with Tsukasa? why is she/he acting like that? or you making Tsukasa and boy in this one? it\'s up to you now well Kite.
Tell anyone about the kiss? and what about Balmung? yeah I see some Jealousy in the next one. and what is going to happend in they meet Wiseman? and what about Subaru?.
And Mimiru? you know the ones that was after Tsukasa? beside eveone from .Hack//Sign. but please some more info in the parings. but nice work done.

tbc...na?.
person Terra
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So you finally updated...nice work, yeah I also was kind of hoping fore Blamung/Kite to kiss but Tsukasa/Kite is something new to see. gee. I wonder how Balmung would react win Kite tells. him about the kiss. or would he tell him? or maybe he can tell Wisemen. no that would be just odd. but I hoping to see some Jealousy and some love. in the next one. this one was and little dark. but in and good way. but if you ask me Kite paird with anyone is always good to read. I almost fell bad fore him since he always seems to get Depresed easy.
person Sailor Aurora
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tskusua is a girl in real life, you know. Although I suppose snice she\'s playing as a guy in the game and she got trapped again too, I suppose that makes her a guy for now.

Balumug\'s one of my favortive characters.. I was mildly dispointed to see that it wasn\'t him who did the kiss. lol
person Rena
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god well this leave me in waiting fore the next one. wish it soon don\'t leave us hangging now good work done.
person .Hacker
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASEEEE!!! CONTINUE THIS FIC! I LOVE IT!!!! I MUST SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO THEM!!!! YOU LEFT ME AT A CLIFFIEEEEEE [CRIES]
person Shara
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I can\'t Agree of Hotaru is and Boy or and Girl don\'t get me wrong but would .Hack//Sign lie to use like that? but I don\'t really know so don\'t kill me yet, but nice one so fair I\'m just saying also check the .Hack dvd\'s and find out you\'re safe. but do please tbc...fore us.
person Maya
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Shakes head* don\'t know about that one, but good fic so good so seriously done by the way so what is going to happed now did you check the parings yet?.
person Swamp_Fox
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
About Hotaru being a boy, I really do not agree with that. There is plenty supporting evidence that Hotaru is in fact a girl. In one of the .hack//LOTB mangas there is even a pic of all main characters in the real world and Hotaru is not a guy in that pic. If you want, you can go to www. theworldbbs . com and check out the discussion there about it. Yes, I know that there is spaces in the url, but that is only to make sure that it isn\'t edited out. Some sites like to do that. Great chapt that you got here. You would think that Tsukasa might have lightened up a little after finally escaping \"The World\", but perhaps all these events have just caused her to get upset again. Can\'t wait to see your next up-date. Laters.
person Minako
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it
Well you the only one I know who updates in the .Hack section...man I thought Kite would be at lest lv.90 or lv.99, that how fair I lv. him up fore .Hack//Quarantine, and Hotaru, being...
A Boy is right if you have .Hack//Integratin, and click on *Sound Drama* it in Japanese but you find out Hoaru\'s and boy and Mireille is like 4-5 years old, or something...and Ouka looks after her and lot. or you can see it on one of the .Hack disks...eather .Hack//Liminalty, or .Hack//Sign vol.6 Terminus. but nice one on the Fanfiction...well Kite, Balmung, and Tsukasa escape the Knights?, in .Hack//Quarantine, you do get Tsukasa as and party member well sort of so Kite and Balmung should know him.

Or did you not Play .Hack///Quarantine?.

tbc...na? to see now what happens now.
person Lilly
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah...eh you\'re right things do beging and end with .Hack, but you did and Good Job on it so fair keep up the good work.

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